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In a Dream

during the night snow began falling and in my dreamy dream I danced with the white snowflakes twirling, and swirling and drifting lost in the lovely filigree they caressed my hair, my eyes, and lips taking away my weeping pain in a dream . . . . __________________________ January 30, 2021 Poetry/Modified Fibonacci/in a dream Copyright Protected, ID 01-1325-161-30 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, All yours (Jan 30) Contest 909 sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 01/31/2021 First Place Poem of the Day - 02/02/2021

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Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 2/9/2021 4:52:00 PM

A lovey vision Constance. I wanted to be in the dream with you dancing in the snow. congrats on POTD!

Constance La France
Date: 2/10/2021 7:55:00 AM

Jeanne, thank you for the congrats and the lovely comment _Constance

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 2/8/2021 6:49:00 AM

Hello Constance, this sounds like a happy dream. Congratulations on your win. Enjoy your day my freind.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/9/2021 3:22:00 PM

Hello Constance, you are welcome my friend. Enjoy your evening .

Constance La France
Date: 2/8/2021 2:39:00 PM

Darlene, thank you for the comment and the congratulations _Constance

Sand Blown

Date: 2/8/2021 3:39:00 AM

...the dream called life : ) .....knocks yer socks off....lol....stan sand

Constance La France
Date: 2/8/2021 2:40:00 PM

Stan, thanks so much for visiting and commenting on my poem _Constance

Ricky Muse

Date: 2/5/2021 5:25:00 PM

Nice. A very sensual poem. Congrats on your win.

Constance La France
Date: 2/6/2021 5:23:00 AM

Ricky, thanks for the compliment and the congrats _Constance

Joseph May

Date: 2/3/2021 5:05:00 AM

Wonderful write Constance..Congrats on POTD

Constance La France
Date: 2/3/2021 10:45:00 AM

Joseph, thanks for the compliment and the congrats _Constance

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/3/2021 1:42:00 AM

- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Constance :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France
Date: 2/3/2021 10:46:00 AM

Anne-Lise, thanks for the congratulations _Constance

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/2/2021 6:04:00 PM

Congrats on POTD!

Constance La France
Date: 2/3/2021 10:46:00 AM

Kim, thanks for the congrats _Constance

Brandy Nicole

Date: 2/2/2021 4:40:00 PM

In dreams, anything is possible. This is beautiful, magical and tender, all at the same time. Congratulations Constance, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy

Constance La France
Date: 2/3/2021 10:47:00 AM

Brandy, thanks for the compliment and the congratulations _Constance

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/2/2021 2:10:00 PM

Lovely penned, Constance! Congrats on POTD, Gershon

Constance La France
Date: 2/2/2021 4:13:00 PM

Gershon, thanks for the lovely and the congrats _Constance

Arturo Michael

Date: 2/2/2021 12:53:00 PM

Now you're dancing in the snow...Well done...Congratulations to Constance La France on POTD.

Constance La France
Date: 2/2/2021 1:01:00 PM

Arturo, thank so much for the comment and the congratulations _ Constance

Niyna Desangre

Date: 2/2/2021 11:41:00 AM

Such a wonderful and beautiful dream. It seems to help heal as if the universe is telling you, "You are loved". Congrats on POTD and First Place.

Constance La France
Date: 2/2/2021 12:53:00 PM

Nina, thank you for the lovely comment and the congratulations _Constance

Sam Kauffman

Date: 2/2/2021 10:45:00 AM

Delicate as a fragile dream - soft as falling snow, Constance. Just lovely. Congratulations on your POTD. Best wishes and blessings to you! May you have beautiful dreams.

Constance La France
Date: 2/2/2021 12:54:00 PM

Sam, thanks for the sweet comment and the congratulations _Constance

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/2/2021 10:03:00 AM

This is simply enchanting Constance. Congratulations on your deserving POTD honor! Blessings xxoo

Constance La France
Date: 2/2/2021 12:55:00 PM

Connie, thank you for the nice comment and the congratulations _ Constance

L Milton Hankins

Date: 2/2/2021 9:02:00 AM

Applause for your lovely reverie, well-written and presenting beautiful imagery. Congratulations on your POTD!

Constance La France
Date: 2/2/2021 12:56:00 PM

Milton, thanks for the compliment and the congratulations _ Constance

Heidi Sands

Date: 2/2/2021 9:01:00 AM

Beautifully written. Congratulations for POTD :)

Constance La France
Date: 2/2/2021 12:57:00 PM

Heidi, thanks for the beautiful and the congratulations _ Constance

Jan Allison

Date: 2/2/2021 8:36:00 AM

many congrats on your win and POTD Constance:-) hugs Jan xx

Constance La France
Date: 2/2/2021 12:58:00 PM

Jan, thanks so much for the congratulations and hugs _ Constance

Eve Roper

Date: 2/2/2021 8:09:00 AM

Lovely, Constance, great feeling and imagery. Congratulations on POTD. Hugs Eve

Constance La France
Date: 2/2/2021 12:59:00 PM

Eve, thank you for the compliment and the congratulations _ Constance

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 2/2/2021 8:09:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTD win. A beautiful and lovely write. I love your line, "I danced with the white snowflakes." Yes, dance with the snowflakes and forget about life. Have a blessed day with your win.....................

Constance La France
Date: 2/2/2021 1:00:00 PM

Paula, thanks for the congratulations and the compliment _ Constance

Greg Gaul

Date: 2/2/2021 7:46:00 AM

A interesting spiral of language to this modified form. High on imagery, only surpassed by its highest placement, well deserved. Congratulations.

Constance La France
Date: 2/2/2021 7:53:00 AM

Greg, thank you so much for the comment and the congratulations, appreciate _Constance

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 2/2/2021 7:18:00 AM

Beautiful, magical poem indeed! Congrats on POTD

Constance La France
Date: 2/2/2021 7:45:00 AM

Seeker, thank you for the compliment and the congrats _Constance

Alexis Y.

Date: 2/2/2021 6:30:00 AM

WoW! BW, What a magical and beautiful dream. To be so carefree and pain-free would be such a delight. Best wishes in the contest. Furthermore, congratulations on getting the poem of the day; It was well deserved. Thanks for sharing such a dream. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Constance La France
Date: 2/2/2021 7:46:00 AM

Alexis, thank you for the compliment on my poem and the congratulations, this was a double win for me of POTD and First Place in Brian's contest _Constance