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In a Dark Room

I sat and waited, alone in a dark, dark room Only the moon light to lesson the gloom My heart beat frantically in my chest Knowing I would soon be put to a test… Then I felt a presence right next to me Something reached out and touched my knee I smelled the stench of death and decay Eyes that burned bright and hair of gray I knew this horror could only bring death And I screamed with the last of my breath Its bony claws lifted me to my feet Now my terror was nearly complete Shaking, being shaken, I came awake "It was a dream, stop screaming for heaven's sake" So just a dream, such a dream on Halloween night.. Such a horrific, glorious dream state fright….. .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 9/29/2014 6:54:00 PM
Wow, such a scary Halloween 'treat' to share!
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Date: 9/25/2014 10:37:00 AM
Great Halloween poem BG...best wishes
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Date: 9/23/2014 1:01:00 PM
Okay Barbara . . . you're really scaring me here!!! Your write has "Halloween" written all over it. Seriously, I enjoyed your couplet immensely. The images you've rendered are right on target for Halloween. This one is a "7." Gore and the Macabre make Halloween Night a Quite Definite Fright!!! -- in a dark room. Best Wishes, Gary
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 9/23/2014 1:16:00 PM
A lighthearted fun contest. I love Halloween and all the CANDY! ..lol .Thanks for stopping by. BG
Date: 9/23/2014 11:40:00 AM
sounds like a nightmare to me Barbara! Grert descriptive write:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/23/2014 9:15:00 AM
This is nice Barb! Love Halloween poems too! :) have fun! Love and light! Hugs! xxxx D.
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