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In the Wizard's Garden

The damsel with the angelic face Always wondered what lay beyond the garden wall Until one day she could not resist at all And went inside those forbidden walls to see this secret place Down three steps she made her way In a dress of tangerine that stood out 'neath skies of gray She walked down the path and wandered near the small canal Unaware that she would soon kindle the wrath Of he who tended the garden beyond the stone wall's path She did not see the wizard as he stood under the archway Attired all in black from head to toe Blending in with the bleakness of the day Ready to cast his spell upon beauty's brow Or ravage the lovely flower he desired so In the garden of the wizard She was the one and only rose As his ghostly silhouette seemed to guard The most precious flower his garden shows For Isaiah's - George Dunlop Leslie - contest

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Date: 8/2/2013 1:15:00 PM
This was really well written, for me I would have enjoyed if you developed the story more, this could be an epic write. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 7/7/2013 1:03:00 PM
interesting one must say! Congrats ~SKAT~
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Date: 6/21/2013 2:47:00 AM
congrats Joseph ....Seren
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Date: 6/19/2013 6:26:00 PM
Awesome description ....congratulations, Joseph On your First Place win......
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Date: 6/19/2013 2:46:00 AM
Really a very interesting and enjoyable poem.
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Date: 6/18/2013 4:24:00 PM
This is amazing., enjoyed reading your winning Poe, warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 6/18/2013 12:08:00 AM
Congratulations Joseph well done seeing you a lot in the winning circle recently, its terrific xx
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Joseph May
Date: 6/18/2013 6:15:00 AM
thank you Mandy
Date: 6/17/2013 11:34:00 PM
Joseph this is first class ... Seren
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Joseph May
Date: 6/18/2013 6:16:00 AM
thank you Seren
Date: 6/17/2013 9:03:00 PM
I am quite taken with the secrecy and slight suspense or mystery about this piece. It does a superb job of bringing the characters and even the landscape of this particular painting to life, and that is what I was looking for. Congratulations on your first place award!
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Joseph May
Date: 6/18/2013 6:15:00 AM
thank you for my first place finish in your contest Isaiah...
Date: 6/11/2013 5:54:00 PM
truly beautiful love it gl in contest Shadow x
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Date: 6/10/2013 12:44:00 AM
Good luck in the contest. Beautiful. AO
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Date: 6/7/2013 2:11:00 AM
- Pleased to read your beautiful poem, Joseph. - Have a superb weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Joseph May
Date: 6/7/2013 10:11:00 AM
thank you Anne
Date: 6/7/2013 12:04:00 AM
joseph, this is one of the pictures I considered writing about and in doing research about the picture, I learned somewhat its meaning. You came close to what I read!! It's a very symbolic picture from what I learned. Good job.
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Joseph May
Date: 6/7/2013 10:14:00 AM
Thank you Andrea...I could not find much on it's symbolic meaning.... can you go into detail via sm....thanks

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