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Implications of Hanging Out In the Clouds

Seven year old asks me about sitting on the clouds after we die. He is afraid he won’t find me there. I tell him we are family. We will be together. I tuck him in with warm Winter comfort. Happily I take the time to dialogue as his eyelids slowly close. His questions, like thirst, satisfied, as far as a child or for that matter, an adult can be. 

in the clouds…
the London fog of eyes…
i can’t see you

It’s not that I believe we will be hanging out in the clouds, but the greater anxiety for him was if and how he would find family there. This was after he said, “When I grow up and move away, will we be able to see each other? How?”

far away
where you disappear —
return by plane or car

Over and over again, i tuck the blanket around his form, under his chin, ask him about school - he’s able to detail his schedule. His earnest eyes find favor with God…his troubles held in Jesus’ palms.

1/5/2022
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Proxenos Avatar
January 6, 2022 at 6:02 AM
You are a philosopher and a deep thinker my friend. Your 7 year old will acquire your talents, as at this age they are like a sponge, soaking up all they hear good and bad. As he grows older, the decision will be his as to what route he will travel. so well penned Kim, Hugs and blessings and huge congrats on being selected for Poetry Soups, 2nd Anthology, 'Its still poetry'. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 6, 2022 at 6:03 AM
Thank you, Jennifer! This second anthology is so exciting! Hugs and blessings, dear one!
Pandit Avatar
January 6, 2022 at 5:49 AM
Much depth to the feeling you convey, Kim--innocent questions from the young ones sometimes make us think how to reassure them. Well done my friend.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 6, 2022 at 6:02 AM
We must take time to listen. When I was a kid, I kept such fears to myself. If my mom had only asked when I hugged her tight. Thanks, Vijay!
Buhagiar Avatar
January 6, 2022 at 1:46 AM
What a cute and charming Haibun, you wrote Kim. Worth reading again. Hugs.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 6, 2022 at 4:13 AM
Thanks so much, Victor! I just love my little grand :)
Neels Avatar
January 5, 2022 at 8:30 PM
This is so beautiful Kim, you gave him some peace of mind with your approach :-)
Rodrigues Avatar
January 6, 2022 at 4:15 AM
Thank you, Wilma. He attended my mom’s funeral this year and he thinks a lot about her. She was so cute with him.
Messina Avatar
January 5, 2022 at 8:16 PM
Beautiful, Kim. Happy New Year! Hugs Charlie
Rodrigues Avatar
January 6, 2022 at 4:15 AM
Happy New Year, my wonderful friend! Thank you!
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