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Imperfect Sonnet

Imperfect Sonnet by Michael R. Burch A word before the light is doused: the night is something wriggling through an unclean mind, as rats creep through a tenement. And loss is written cheaply with the moon’s cracked gloss like lipstick through the infinite, to show love’s pale yet sordid imprint on us. Go. We have not learned love yet, except to cleave. I saw the moon rise once ... but to believe ... was of another century ... and now ... I have the urge to love, but not the strength. Despair, once stretched out to its utmost length, lies couched in squalor, watching as the screen reveals "love's" damaged images: its dreams ... and emulating limply, screams and screams. Originally published by Sonnet Scroll

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 1/23/2020 11:31:00 AM
Very good! The very "imperfection" of your 'sonnet' distinguishes it as an authentic and original creation neither straining to fit a conventional mold nor protesting too loudly against orthodoxy but expressing complex and truly felt human emotion. Thank you!
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Michael Burch
Date: 1/23/2020 12:42:00 PM
Thanks, I'm glad you think so. Some of my favorite sonnets are rulebreakers, like Robert Hayden's "Those Winter Sundays" and the curtal sonnets of Gerard Manley Hopkins. I like the original definition of sonnet as a "little song" without all the rigid rules.

Book: Shattered Sighs