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Imperfect Creation

She stood on the stage trying to be everything, everyone wanted her to be As her talents fell with the curtain, because she just wanted to be herself To play the music true to her, without being graded for every part of it To freely play her sports or create without endless expectations to meet Years later, she peeled away the idea of perfection, planted in her mind She found her own way to do what she loves, as each day unfolds more She broke free from everyone who had set standards she could never reach --- Overall it was love that was conditional --- Her path to freedom was paved with acceptance of herself and the truth --- Empowered by faith with imperfect creation --- Heidi Sands 9/27/17

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Date: 1/23/2019 12:34:00 AM
This is really good. I said myself that expectation is the death of creativity Having a large following can be a gift and a curse
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Heidi Sands
Date: 1/23/2019 7:56:00 AM
That is a good interpretation of it. It also is to show it is ok to be imperfect. Creativity does not have to be perfect. Thank you for your comment :)
Date: 9/28/2017 5:01:00 AM
This is deeper than it seems on the surface, a very powerful write indeed my friend! I really enjoyed reading it this morning! What a fantastic piece, Great Work!!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/28/2017 7:31:00 AM
Thank you Russell :)
Date: 9/27/2017 11:35:00 PM
Your poem resonates with me :) So well done! <3
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/28/2017 7:31:00 AM
Thank you Sara :)
Date: 9/27/2017 7:22:00 PM
Not a pleasant experience when we do things to please others--well said!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/27/2017 7:40:00 PM
Yes you are right. Thank you :)
Date: 9/27/2017 7:00:00 PM
We have to be true to ourselves...Very well expressed Heidi..
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Heidi Sands
Date: 9/27/2017 7:00:00 PM
Yes, always, Joseph. Thank you for your visit and comment :)

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