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The Bible says we are all made in God's image, in every way we're a match, so why can't I reach part of my shoulder blades from above or below for a scratch? The Good Lord resides in the Heavens above, perfection, where nothing can fail, so why can't I lift my foot up far enough on my other leg to clip my nails? God is immaculate, he stands incorrupt, in all aspects nothing he lacks, so why is my fingertip just that bit short when I'm clearing my earhole of wax? Is it because Adam and Eve were perfect until they disobeyed God and they sinned, and everyone born after that had their faults, the original model God binned? And that is why though we are all sinners now because of the choices they made, the Good Lord had mercy, invented the spoon so that I can reach my shoulder blade.

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Date: 2/24/2018 10:43:00 PM
Hi Viv..........if some one does not believe in God, your poem is enough to make him believe in Him. If we are perfect then do we need God....you are absolutely true...... Thanks
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Date: 2/18/2018 9:07:00 PM
Those are very deep thoughts, Viv. Your wit will get you far in life, or at least ensure a sufficient spoon collection. LOL
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Date: 2/18/2018 11:10:00 PM
Thanks, Line, I do indeed have a fine collection of spoons. regards, Viv
Date: 2/18/2018 8:05:00 PM
Lolol! Fun to read. Love your humor.
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Date: 2/18/2018 11:10:00 PM
Thanks, Suzy G, hope you're well. Viv x
Date: 2/18/2018 6:54:00 PM
I sure love the mercy part at the end. Lord have mercy, this one rocks!
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Date: 2/18/2018 11:11:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea. My good lady uses a knitting needle. Ouch! Viv x
Date: 2/18/2018 12:31:00 PM
A round of applause for you witty humour, Viv:) I've heard that with the passing of years, even the spoon becomes obsolete! ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 2/18/2018 11:11:00 PM
Thanks, Paul. Indeed, as we age, the spoon gets longer :) . Regards, Viv
Date: 2/18/2018 10:50:00 AM
Ha ha, this is beyond fun. You have tapped into your heavely perfection.
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Date: 2/18/2018 11:12:00 PM
Thanks, Richard. Keep on scratching! Regards, Viv
Date: 2/18/2018 9:42:00 AM
I love this wonderful witty verse. Everything might had been perfect at one time, but we would look like monkeys with long arms :) . The clipping of nails is another story we are getting old and cannot flex like we use tooooooooo .. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 2/18/2018 11:13:00 PM
Eve, I like the idea of long arms- it takes me an age to straighten up after tying my laces :( . Thanks for dropping by. Viv x
Date: 2/18/2018 8:30:00 AM
Lol, made me laugh out loud Viv…thank God for spoons! Love the wit in this biblical fun write!~Che :)
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Date: 2/18/2018 11:14:00 PM
Thanks, Cheryl, yes, everything has other uses- spoons open paint tins, too x
Date: 2/18/2018 7:26:00 AM
Excellent wit my friend...
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Date: 2/18/2018 11:14:00 PM
Thanks, Silent One, I do enjoy my occasional bouts of off beat buffoonery. regards, Viv
Date: 2/18/2018 1:23:00 AM
Viv a wonderfully refreshing piece that put a smile on my face this morning. Thank you for such a write.
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Date: 2/18/2018 1:34:00 AM
Thanks, Michael, sorry I didn't reply immediately, I was trying to reach an itch. Glad you enjoyed it. Regards, Viv

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