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Craft calm choice Prize pure poise Dance deep dream Spice soft stream Grand glimpse gain Please pet pain Seize sweet scope Rest raw rope Leon Enriquez 10 September 2019 Singapore

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David Smith

Date: 9/11/2019 12:52:00 PM

Love how your work remains true to the essence of what good poetry should be. If it ain't broke don't try and fix it. Part of it is about trusting your instinct and your passion and not trying too hard to impress and learning from others but not copying. Poetry soup fosters all of this, especially the trust valuing each others work but never giving false praise. Best regards David

Leon Enriquez
Date: 9/12/2019 3:05:00 AM

Dear David: Thank you my Friend for your very kind words. All the best then, Leon.