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Immortality

IMMORTALITY Each time, You, my beloved, Into my arms I hold, Immortality I embrace But Each time, Your presence I miss, Mortal I become Again! © Demetrios Trifiatis 02 March 2013

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Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 3/2/2013 7:54:00 PM

Again those beautiful words that come from the heart. Thanks Lucilla

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/3/2013 1:08:00 AM

Thank you, once more, Lucilla.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 3/2/2013 2:03:00 PM

Lovely...as usual...lovely

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/2/2013 3:31:00 PM

Thank you dear Eileen! You are very kind!

Russell Sivey

Date: 3/2/2013 5:21:00 AM

This is a brilliantly wondrous write my friend! I am amazed at its splendor Demetrios, you have brought a great impression upon me with this tremendous poem! What a lovely piece, so very expressive, Great Work!!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 3/3/2013 1:15:00 AM

Thank you my friend! As always gallant and jenerous!