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Immortality

The little chores I have to do Important only in my view. The world would still be sad or fun If I were gone, with chores undone. When all the other lives I touch Are past, there’ll not be very much To make the world aware that I Was here to live, to love, to die. If single rhyme of mine is found, A bit of me is still around.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 1/30/2012 8:50:00 AM
Yes, I am sure that a bit will be found..Great way to go lady..Enjoyed reading your win..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 1/25/2012 6:09:00 PM
a little sad some of this but ends on a happy little note. You will always be remembered by ME, Joyce. Congrats on this one.
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Date: 1/25/2012 8:52:00 AM
If sadly you were to go away I'm glad your poetry's here to stay Enjoyed this Joyce. Congrats
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Date: 1/25/2012 6:09:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in Brian's "UPTO Fourteen" contest Joyce. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/16/2011 4:53:00 PM
I can see why you won with this one Joyce real true wording & sentiment..)
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Date: 12/16/2011 9:25:00 AM
Congratulation my friend on your win and wish you and all yours 'Happy Christmas Day and Happy New Year'.bl
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Date: 12/15/2011 4:01:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning entry Jon
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Date: 12/15/2011 10:23:00 AM
you always shine, dear joyce.. sweet cheers to you for the win!:) huggs!
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Date: 12/15/2011 8:36:00 AM
I hope in some old dusty tome We'll always find another poem Congratulations Joyce
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Date: 12/15/2011 5:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Two To Twelve" contest Joyce. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/15/2011 4:05:00 AM
Congratulations that is lovely Joyce yet sad. Happy forthcoming holidays x
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Date: 12/13/2011 10:32:00 AM
Joyce, we do tend to worry so much about the routine chores in our lives, but what we hope for most is to leave a lasting impression. Let me assure you, you have made a most welcome impression on me as your poetry always touches my heart. Beautiful! Love, Carolyn
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