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Immortality

Immortality is not for me Heaven is the home where I want to be I will sing songs for Thee Each day praying on my knee Heaven is the home where I want to be Away from this crazy world I want to flee Heaven here my plea Until then I will rest with a cup of hot tea Date Written: 7/18/2021 5 Place Note: Light Verse Rhyme IMMORTALITY YES OR NO Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Chantelle Anne Cooke

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Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/29/2021 4:35:00 AM

A beautiful write on this subject. Congratulations on your win!

Beata Agustin

Date: 7/28/2021 11:36:00 PM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this delightful muse of yours on immortality. God bless you.

Ann Foster

Date: 7/22/2021 8:33:00 AM

Well written. Ann

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/22/2021 10:33:00 AM

Thank You, for writing. Glad you like this Immortality write. Have a blessed day........

Rama Balasubramanian

Date: 7/20/2021 11:20:00 AM

Wonderful write friend. Many prefer heaven to immortality. How wonderful it would be to sing god's glory in heaven. All the best for contest. Thanks for brightening my Potd with your wonderful comments.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/20/2021 12:18:00 PM

Thank You, for writing and for your best. Glad you like this one. Glad you got POTD. Enjoy it. Have a blessed day...................

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/19/2021 4:28:00 PM

It seem you are going to learn to embrace immortality in the world to come. The destination makes all the difference.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/20/2021 10:51:00 AM

Thank You, for writing. Glad you like this one. Guess I will learn more latter. Have a blessed day...................

Heidi Sands

Date: 7/19/2021 2:30:00 PM

Well written Paula. And for now enjoy your rest with a cup of tea :)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/20/2021 10:50:00 AM

Thank You, for writing. Glad you like this one. Yes, for now it is tea and a rest. Have a blessed day...................

Vijay Pandit

Date: 7/19/2021 11:21:00 AM

Skillfully written, Paula. I agree with the essence of your message. Best for a win.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/20/2021 10:48:00 AM

Thank You, for writing and for your best. Glad you like this write. Have a blessed day...................

Judy Ball

Date: 7/18/2021 5:52:00 PM

Oh well said Paula. I can just feel the love in this. Great write . God Bless, JB

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/19/2021 9:37:00 AM

Thank You, for writing. Glad you like this one. Have a blessed day/week...............

Sotto Poet

Date: 7/18/2021 3:44:00 PM

Very well-penned poem Paula, you depicted the immortality subject from a wonderful angle. I liked this line: Immortality is not for me. Heaven is the home where I want to be Good luck in the contest

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/19/2021 9:36:00 AM

Thank You, for writing and for your good luck. Glad you like this write. Have a blessed day/week...............