Paula Goldsmith Poet Light Verse

Immortality

Immortality is not for me                                                   Heaven is the home where I want to be                               I will sing songs for Thee                                                   Each day praying on my knee                                             Heaven is the home where I want to be                               Away from this crazy world I want to flee                             Heaven here my plea                                                         Until then I will rest with a cup of hot tea   


Date Written: 7/18/2021   

5 Place 

Note: Light Verse Rhyme 
IMMORTALITY YES OR NO Poetry Contest                             Sponsored by: Chantelle Anne Cooke

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Christuraj Alex July 29, 2021 at 4:35 AM A beautiful write on this subject. Congratulations on your win!

Beata Agustin July 28, 2021 at 11:36 PM Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this delightful muse of yours on immortality. God bless you.

Ann Foster July 22, 2021 at 8:33 AM Well written. Ann Paula Goldsmith July 22, 2021 at 10:33 AM Thank You, for writing. Glad you like this Immortality write. Have a blessed day........

Rama Balasubramanian July 20, 2021 at 11:20 AM Wonderful write friend. Many prefer heaven to immortality. How wonderful it would be to sing god's glory in heaven. All the best for contest. Thanks for brightening my Potd with your wonderful comments. Paula Goldsmith July 20, 2021 at 12:18 PM Thank You, for writing and for your best. Glad you like this one. Glad you got POTD. Enjoy it. Have a blessed day...................

Richard Lamoureux July 19, 2021 at 4:28 PM It seem you are going to learn to embrace immortality in the world to come. The destination makes all the difference. Paula Goldsmith July 20, 2021 at 10:51 AM Thank You, for writing. Glad you like this one. Guess I will learn more latter. Have a blessed day...................

Heidi Sands July 19, 2021 at 2:30 PM Well written Paula. And for now enjoy your rest with a cup of tea :) Paula Goldsmith July 20, 2021 at 10:50 AM Thank You, for writing. Glad you like this one. Yes, for now it is tea and a rest. Have a blessed day...................

Vijay Pandit July 19, 2021 at 11:21 AM Skillfully written, Paula. I agree with the essence of your message. Best for a win. Paula Goldsmith July 20, 2021 at 10:48 AM Thank You, for writing and for your best. Glad you like this write. Have a blessed day...................

Judy Ball July 18, 2021 at 5:52 PM Oh well said Paula. I can just feel the love in this. Great write . God Bless, JB Paula Goldsmith July 19, 2021 at 9:37 AM Thank You, for writing. Glad you like this one. Have a blessed day/week...............

Sotto Poet July 18, 2021 at 3:44 PM Very well-penned poem Paula, you depicted the immortality subject from a wonderful angle. I liked this line: Immortality is not for me. Heaven is the home where I want to be Good luck in the contest Paula Goldsmith July 19, 2021 at 9:36 AM Thank You, for writing and for your good luck. Glad you like this write. Have a blessed day/week...............