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Immortality

Immortality is not for me
                                                  
Heaven is the home where I want to be
                              
I will sing songs for Thee
                                                  
Each day praying on my knee 
                                           
Heaven is the home where I want to be
                              
Away from this crazy world I want to flee
                            
Heaven here my plea
                                                        
Until then I will rest with a cup of hot tea
   
Date Written: 7/18/2021
  
5 Place
 
Note: Light Verse Rhyme
 
IMMORTALITY YES OR NO Poetry Contest
                            
Sponsored by: Chantelle Anne Cooke
  

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Date: 7/29/2021 4:35:00 AM
A beautiful write on this subject. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 7/28/2021 11:36:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this delightful muse of yours on immortality. God bless you.
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Date: 7/22/2021 8:33:00 AM
Well written. Ann
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/22/2021 10:33:00 AM
Thank You, for writing. Glad you like this Immortality write. Have a blessed day........
Date: 7/20/2021 11:20:00 AM
Wonderful write friend. Many prefer heaven to immortality. How wonderful it would be to sing god's glory in heaven. All the best for contest. Thanks for brightening my Potd with your wonderful comments.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/20/2021 12:18:00 PM
Thank You, for writing and for your best. Glad you like this one. Glad you got POTD. Enjoy it. Have a blessed day...................
Date: 7/19/2021 4:28:00 PM
It seem you are going to learn to embrace immortality in the world to come. The destination makes all the difference.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/20/2021 10:51:00 AM
Thank You, for writing. Glad you like this one. Guess I will learn more latter. Have a blessed day...................
Date: 7/19/2021 2:30:00 PM
Well written Paula. And for now enjoy your rest with a cup of tea :)
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/20/2021 10:50:00 AM
Thank You, for writing. Glad you like this one. Yes, for now it is tea and a rest. Have a blessed day...................
Date: 7/19/2021 11:21:00 AM
Skillfully written, Paula. I agree with the essence of your message. Best for a win.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/20/2021 10:48:00 AM
Thank You, for writing and for your best. Glad you like this write. Have a blessed day...................
Date: 7/18/2021 5:52:00 PM
Oh well said Paula. I can just feel the love in this. Great write . God Bless, JB
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/19/2021 9:37:00 AM
Thank You, for writing. Glad you like this one. Have a blessed day/week...............
Date: 7/18/2021 3:44:00 PM
Very well-penned poem Paula, you depicted the immortality subject from a wonderful angle. I liked this line: Immortality is not for me. Heaven is the home where I want to be Good luck in the contest
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/19/2021 9:36:00 AM
Thank You, for writing and for your good luck. Glad you like this write. Have a blessed day/week...............