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Immortal Rose

Gentle morning breezes kiss the budding rose And nurse it in the sturdy cradle vine Scented dewdrops linger with the morn To bathe the child in clear and bubbly wine. Soon after nature's flower child is born The news is hastened on the fragile wing Ecstatic purrs announce the hummingbird Who comes to dedicate this precious thing. Faint whispers in the misty air are heard Before responses chanted fade to sighs And aged petals dip to touch the earth This rose may wave immortal to the skies. [This poem was originally written for my first anthology, The Lady in the Pink Hat, Candor Press, 1969.] FIRST PLACE WINNER Brian Strand's "All Yours" Contest April, 2021

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Date: 4/12/2021 8:19:00 PM
You captured me with the imagery that you created in your poem. Beautifully constructed rhythm...powerful phrasing. Congratulations Milton!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/13/2021 7:08:00 AM
Thank you so much, George. I appreciated your read and this beautiful comment.
Date: 4/11/2021 9:07:00 PM
Wow! Congrats on your well deserved win, with this beautiful work, Milton!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/11/2021 9:39:00 PM
Thank you so much, Unseeking Seeker. This was one of my oldies, but goodies. I appreciate your kind comment.
Date: 4/11/2021 12:07:00 PM
I love the imagery in this, Milton! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/11/2021 12:50:00 PM
Thanks so much, Kim. I wasn't aware that it won in a contest until you mentioned it.
Date: 4/8/2021 7:44:00 PM
Nice descriptiveness and rhyming in this delightful piece.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/8/2021 8:41:00 PM
Thanks, Robert, for your kind and thoughtful notes on my poem. I really appreciate you.

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