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Immortal Bucolic Painting

He ran the palm of his hand across the canvas,
Felt its soft, smooth surface, excellent fabric.
It was well primed with gesso, and he was sure
The end result would be an immortal masterpiece
    
       The quintessential fragrance of daffodils,
                   a carpet of yellows in secluded woodlands,
        new-born lambs on wobbly legs bleating for milk,
                   bees irresistibly drawn to luscious nectar.
        male cotton less cottonwood trees flourish
                   as do the blooming peach trees erupting in fruit.
        And birds flying here and there, chirping delightfully.

        On one side a cottage, beautifully thatched,
                 with a rivulet wending its way from the water mill, 
        on the other, a bench beneath an alder leaf birch.
                 There sat a young maiden fair to behold,
        on his knees was a young shepherd hand outstretched,
                 barely touching, proposing, as she smiles happily.

The painter looked satisfied.  It had taken days
But finish it he did.  The Museum would be satisfied.
After all weren’t all his vast landscapes immortal?
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Raven Avatar
July 28, 2022 at 2:44 PM
Hi Victor, once again, outstanding poetry my friend. Art is ever immortal, as are these words that paint the canvas of the mind. Your words paint a Kaleidoscope before the eyes. This is an excellent piece and it is deserving of a fave my friend, so I shall be giving it one. Have a wonderful evening. Your friend always ..... Mike.
Bayles Avatar
June 22, 2022 at 10:15 AM
Great imagery. Maybe a painting like that would be immortal- if not too many people touch it.
Skelly Avatar
June 21, 2022 at 3:03 AM
Art is truly immortal....Delice
Rodrigues Avatar
June 20, 2022 at 5:55 PM
How wonderful! Impeccable imagery, dear poet!
Kitchin Avatar
June 20, 2022 at 2:43 PM
Wonderful imagery Victor, enjoyed!
Roper Avatar
June 20, 2022 at 8:11 AM
Lovely scene, Victor, the colors , brushstrokes, the scene of a canvas tells everything the artist was feeling when painting. So romantic to add the shepherd, maybe proposing something that has disappeared some what with the now times.
May Avatar
June 20, 2022 at 6:02 AM
You describe the painting well Victor, best wishes
Seeker Avatar
June 20, 2022 at 3:51 AM
Another level! This is easily one of your best creations, Victor!
Tor Avatar
June 19, 2022 at 10:26 PM
victor this is a masterpiece as the painting you wrote about. Incredible Poetry I just experienced. You are gifted my friend. This one is a favorite for me. It really touched me because my late father Rene was a sulpture and a painter after his retirement from GM. President Reagan awarded him a recognition letter for sculpturing him in a canvas of wood, it is in the Reagan Library. He also painted and was honored at the University of Rochester by the students there. Be blessed my friend...
Tor Avatar
June 20, 2022 at 6:39 PM
I was he was a kind man that always was helping others and putting others before himself. My dad passed in September of 2021 he was 84, midd him dearly...
Buhagiar Avatar
June 20, 2022 at 12:38 AM
You must br proud of your father. Great man.
Anaya Avatar
June 19, 2022 at 5:05 PM
A most beautiful scene you have described, a masterpiece. I'm glad to hear her reciprocate his romantic feelings toward her. Wonderful, Victor!
Gorelick Avatar
June 19, 2022 at 4:56 PM
Your words portray a vision as utopian and vivid as an idyllic museum master work. Robert
Buehler Avatar
June 19, 2022 at 10:33 AM
A memorable poem containing exquisitely lovely, tranquil scenes. A treasure! :)
Edmonds  Avatar
June 19, 2022 at 8:14 AM
An immortal masterpiece of poetry Victor, an artist with pen and ink are you. A beautiful landscape painting skilfully defined in poetic words… Belle
Poet Avatar
June 19, 2022 at 6:13 AM
Victor, your poetry is breathtaking. You have a wonderful talent for articulating and depicting profound ideas. The painted landscape was so accurately reflected... And both writing and the watercolor you listed are great works of art and will live on forever.
Kannan Avatar
June 19, 2022 at 5:21 AM
Absolutely a pleasure to read this wonderful poetry, Victor... So beautifully described the painted landscape... Both the poetry and the painting you mentioned are masterpieces and immortal...
Kendrick Avatar
June 19, 2022 at 3:30 AM
Very descriptive work. I wonder did the young lady accept the proposal? I enjoyed reading your work. Sara
George Avatar
June 18, 2022 at 11:55 PM
Your landscapes are immortal as the painting, dear Victor ! Love it !
Logan Avatar
June 18, 2022 at 4:08 PM
Victor, your descriptive lines held me spellbound. You paint well with words.
Pandit Avatar
June 18, 2022 at 3:12 PM
You captured the beauty and brought forth its bucolic setting through your gifted pen. Much enjoyed the details you convey, Victor. Excellent, as always.
Cunningham Avatar
June 18, 2022 at 2:59 PM
You captured the thoughts of the artist well Victor, saw them at work once in Montmartre in Paris, I watched in awe. Tom
Rose  Avatar
June 18, 2022 at 2:28 PM
There is so much beauty to be found on a canvass, if the eyes are capable of seeing the art as it is, lovely write Victor, this depicts the artist in you :)
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