Imagine This-First Date,First Kiss

I'm painting up my face and nails 
with just a touch of teen.
Cos' Mama's inspection never fails;
of child and adult I'm in between.

Daddy answers the door below;
a nervous young man appears.
Glaring with a fatherly glow
dear old dad nearly brought him to tears!

Quickly I brush my hair once more
and down the stairs I fly.
Bye we say and we're out the door;
I swear I saw my mama cry!

Off we go in his silver caddy
and I ask him where we're going.
I'm sweet sixteen and free of Daddy
so I guess my excitement was showing.

To a movie and casual dinner
is what this boy had planned.
I said "sounds like a winner" 
and thus the flames were fanned.

He treated me to a burger and fries;
afterwards we shared a kiss.
All you could hear were panting sighs;
my practice pillow never felt like this!

A very special night of firsts-
my first kiss, my first date.
The night rolled on with happy bursts
until it grew to be late.

I never wanted all this to end-
thought I was falling in love!
Impressionable it was easy to send
my heart up to heaven above

And so that was my very first date-
finally at home I did arrive.
Daddy was waiting by the front gate
to make sure his little girl was alive!



for Frank H's contest "First Date"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 6/11/2014 10:34:00 AM
real great fun piece Deb, truely a joy to read , loved the line 'my practice pillow never felt like this!', oh yes we can relate to that. well done, have great day, Gordon
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Date: 3/30/2014 4:20:00 PM
Hi Deb, Congratulations, on your win... Nice First Date entry..... xox~ LINDA
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Date: 3/24/2014 9:23:00 AM
wow!!!! ..this is so cute.. and awesome experience... !!! I haven't had a first date......but I had my first kiss when i was 14.,.and he's my first love! ... so I can relate with the thrills!! .. CONGRATULATIONS for winning the top place!! ^__^ big hugsss,, ^__^
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Date: 3/24/2014 9:05:00 AM
Congrats on your win
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Date: 3/24/2014 8:10:00 AM
Now that's a GOOD first date..unlike mine. lol. Congrats to you! BG
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Date: 3/24/2014 7:34:00 AM
Awsome write!
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Date: 3/23/2014 10:44:00 PM
Lovely words and memories. Congrats......Seren
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Date: 3/23/2014 9:54:00 PM
Very lovely write on the first date. Congrats on the fine win, deb
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Date: 3/23/2014 7:50:00 PM
so happy this scored high. BIG congrats,sweetie
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Date: 3/23/2014 4:28:00 PM
A most entertaining and fun read. Big congrats on this terrific write! Hugs
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Date: 3/23/2014 3:11:00 PM
Congratulations on the win Deb... Verlena
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Date: 3/9/2014 10:31:00 AM
this is the PERFECT entry for this type of contest, Deb!! I love it. Soupmail for ya.
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Date: 3/9/2014 9:29:00 AM
It sounded like a perfect first date. Well written.....Tim
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Date: 3/9/2014 4:38:00 AM
wonderfully written poem which i am sure so many of us can relate to. Good luck in the competition. Jan
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Date: 3/9/2014 3:20:00 AM
;) Lovely, Deb!! What got me was that practice pillow. You captured the first date so well. Lovely. Thanks for your support. It means so much to me. Hugs
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