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Imagine This-First Date,First Kiss

I'm painting up my face and nails with just a touch of teen. Cos' Mama's inspection never fails; of child and adult I'm in between. Daddy answers the door below; a nervous young man appears. Glaring with a fatherly glow dear old dad nearly brought him to tears! Quickly I brush my hair once more and down the stairs I fly. Bye we say and we're out the door; I swear I saw my mama cry! Off we go in his silver caddy and I ask him where we're going. I'm sweet sixteen and free of Daddy so I guess my excitement was showing. To a movie and casual dinner is what this boy had planned. I said "sounds like a winner" and thus the flames were fanned. He treated me to a burger and fries; afterwards we shared a kiss. All you could hear were panting sighs; my practice pillow never felt like this! A very special night of firsts- my first kiss, my first date. The night rolled on with happy bursts until it grew to be late. I never wanted all this to end- thought I was falling in love! Impressionable it was easy to send my heart up to heaven above And so that was my very first date- finally at home I did arrive. Daddy was waiting by the front gate to make sure his little girl was alive! for Frank H's contest "First Date"

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Date: 6/11/2014 10:34:00 AM
real great fun piece Deb, truely a joy to read , loved the line 'my practice pillow never felt like this!', oh yes we can relate to that. well done, have great day, Gordon
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Date: 3/30/2014 4:20:00 PM
Hi Deb, Congratulations, on your win... Nice First Date entry..... xox~ LINDA
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Date: 3/24/2014 9:23:00 AM
wow!!!! ..this is so cute.. and awesome experience... !!! I haven't had a first date......but I had my first kiss when i was 14.,.and he's my first love! ... so I can relate with the thrills!! .. CONGRATULATIONS for winning the top place!! ^__^ big hugsss,, ^__^
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Date: 3/24/2014 9:05:00 AM
Congrats on your win
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Date: 3/24/2014 8:10:00 AM
Now that's a GOOD first date..unlike mine. lol. Congrats to you! BG
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Date: 3/24/2014 7:34:00 AM
Awsome write!
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Date: 3/23/2014 10:44:00 PM
Lovely words and memories. Congrats......Seren
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Date: 3/23/2014 9:54:00 PM
Very lovely write on the first date. Congrats on the fine win, deb
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Date: 3/23/2014 7:50:00 PM
so happy this scored high. BIG congrats,sweetie
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Date: 3/23/2014 4:28:00 PM
A most entertaining and fun read. Big congrats on this terrific write! Hugs
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Date: 3/23/2014 3:11:00 PM
Congratulations on the win Deb... Verlena
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Date: 3/9/2014 10:31:00 AM
this is the PERFECT entry for this type of contest, Deb!! I love it. Soupmail for ya.
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Date: 3/9/2014 9:29:00 AM
It sounded like a perfect first date. Well written.....Tim
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Date: 3/9/2014 4:38:00 AM
wonderfully written poem which i am sure so many of us can relate to. Good luck in the competition. Jan
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Date: 3/9/2014 3:20:00 AM
;) Lovely, Deb!! What got me was that practice pillow. You captured the first date so well. Lovely. Thanks for your support. It means so much to me. Hugs
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