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I bet no-one has tried doing this, but they go snow boarding and skiing in the same weather :)

Imagine swinging in a hammock on a winter's day If you're bundled up enough, it may be ok? If you're in the arms of another, maybe even great! If you haven't tried...well, it's not too late Swinging above the land all covered white Under the pines, swaying on like a kite Swinging peacefully together, hand in hand Hey, even if you fall out, a soft place to land! :) So, who says hammocks are only for summer? There's skiing and snowboarding? No hammock? A bummer! Heidi Sands 11/29/18

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Warren Doll

Date: 12/3/2018 7:58:00 AM

Great idea and poem, Heidi. If you invented one that could be turned so it wouldn't fill with snow during a storm, I'll bet they would be used more during the winter. Warm wishes~ Warren

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/3/2018 8:24:00 AM

Hi, Warren. Yes, that's an idea. I have one in the summer that I take in and out. It is a cloth one to hang on hooks. So, I don't leave it out in the rain. So, either a designed one that stays outside, or bringing it in and out like summer. Or hey, maybe some kind of heated one for winter would be nice LOL Thank you for your comment :)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/1/2018 8:21:00 PM

You are right. Why not? Reminds me of that old Bing Crosby classic: "Would you like to swing on a star? // Carry moonbeams home in a jar?" So if one can swing on a star, why not on a hammock! :) gw

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/3/2018 8:23:00 AM

Right , Why not? Thanks for your comment on this Gershon :)

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 12/1/2018 10:28:00 AM

This put a wintergreen cool smile on my face, Heidi. Real fresh POV poetry. Glistening muse ... ty for sharing this thoughtful romantic dare. Love and more love always.

Heidi Sands
Date: 12/1/2018 10:40:00 AM

Happy to hear about your wintergreen cool smile Freddie! Thank you :)

Bobby May

Date: 11/30/2018 9:43:00 AM

That was awesome Heidi, another great poem will it ever end? How much time did you spend swinging on that swing holding hands tell us the rest of the story, now I am intrigued.

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/30/2018 3:34:00 PM

Thank you Bobby. I spend time in it in the summer. This winter idea is new ..lol :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 11/30/2018 5:29:00 AM

Delightfully done poem that has brought a broad smile on my lips! Thank you dearest, Heidi! xxx

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/30/2018 7:58:00 AM

Thank you Demetrios. That is great to hear :)

Mike Hauser

Date: 11/29/2018 8:17:00 PM

Big smiles in this one!

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/30/2018 7:58:00 AM

Thank you Mike :)

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 11/29/2018 6:28:00 PM

I love the picture you created!

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/29/2018 7:00:00 PM

Thank you Sunlite! I am happy to hear that :)

Constance La France

Date: 11/29/2018 6:24:00 PM

Heidi, fun write, well the closest I came to this is sleeping in a tent outside in the winter all snuggled up in a sleeping bag, sort of a nightmare really ~

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/29/2018 7:00:00 PM

Oh that sounds rough! Thank you for your comment on this. I am happy you found it to be a fun write :)

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 11/29/2018 3:44:00 PM

Fine write Heidi, great imagery and super rhyme too.

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/29/2018 3:49:00 PM

Thank you Gordon. I appreciate your kind words :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 11/29/2018 3:17:00 PM

Hi Heidi, I can't say that I have. But you make it wonderful. Who knows? Maybe I will try it( if I could find some snow) lol. Thanks for penning this fun seasonal piece:-) Alexis

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/29/2018 3:23:00 PM

LoL! Thank you Alexis. I do have plenty of snow here for you ..oh and hammock too :)

Mike Gentile

Date: 11/29/2018 1:44:00 PM

This is really a fun seasonal write Heidi! I might try it after a couple of Brandies xxoo Happy Thursday!

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/29/2018 2:47:00 PM

LOL. Thank you Mike :) Happy Thursday!

Joseph May

Date: 11/29/2018 1:28:00 PM

I enjoyed this fun write Heidi..best wishes

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/29/2018 2:47:00 PM

I am so happy you enjoyed it Joseph. Thank you :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/29/2018 12:59:00 PM

Hammock or not your thoughts are upbeat..a pleasant read..joyful.

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/29/2018 1:12:00 PM

Thank you Vijay! I appreciate all your support :)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 11/29/2018 12:25:00 PM

Hi Heidi, It sounds like an adventure that many should try! A lovely write Heidi. Best wishes, Jennifer.

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/29/2018 12:39:00 PM

Hi Jennifer. I agree. Maybe so! Thank you for your kind comment :)

Chris Green

Date: 11/29/2018 11:50:00 AM

I had never thought of that before but is does sound like fun, as long as you don't fall asleep and wake up two feet under. : )

Heidi Sands
Date: 11/29/2018 11:56:00 AM

LOL Good point. I hadn't thought of that...falling asleep and waking up 2 feet under! Ok ...*revised some. Warning: don't use with impending storm. :)