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In the elm outside my window, roosts a mysterious bird. I listened as he squawked and fluttered. This is what I heard, "If God had given you wings, would you fly away with me?" To have wings and fly like a bird? What a gift that would be! He perched on the window sill when I raised it to climb out. "Your arms will turn into wings if you trust without a doubt." I closed my eyes in anticipation and flapped my little arms. My body started rising above the elm tree and then the farms. "Oh goodness!" I cried out to the bird, "I see so far and wide!" I soared on wings over fields, the mysterious bird at my side, and when we passed a flock of geese, they honked in surprise. What a spectacle I must seem to be, flying high up in the skies. "Watch out!" Too late did I see the reason for his warning, for right into a cloud I flew. It hadn't been there this morning. I was lost inside the cottony layers and couldn't see a thing, when suddenly I felt the gentle tap of the beautiful bird's wing. "This way. Follow me, and please tell me, what's your name." I told him it was Mamette, but all my friends just call me Mame. I asked his name because I didn't want to call him 'bird' all day. He flew around me in big circles before he told me it was Clay. Clay and I flew all around the coutryside, creating quite a stir. Sometimes we zoomed so high that everything became a blur. You should've seen the faces of people who stared in disbelief and I heard them shout at me, "That's Mame, oh good grief!" We landed for a moment, but only for Clay to catch a worm, he swallowed it and offered me one, but I could only squirm. Into the sky we rose again. I wish this day would last forever! I wanted to find a way to keep my wings, if I could be so clever. Clay started flying faster and I followed his route as best I could. "What's wrong?" I asked. He said the weather didn't look good. Dark clouds were moving in. I heard the roar of mighty thunder. "Let's find a place to land," he said, "a roof we can stay dry under." I was more than a little frightened of the lightning bolts that flashed, so I told him I wanted to go home and then away I quickly dashed. I spied my open window and flew in when raindrops began to fall. Clay was not behind me so I put my head out of the window to call. There he was, up in the elm, with a wing protecting another bird. He whistled at me, nodded his head, and this is what I heard. "Go back inside, dear little Mame. Don't you worry about me. We'll fly the skies again some day when you feel like being free." <> <> <> <> <> <> <> <> January 26, 201 <> Imagination Contest <> Shadow Hamilton

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Date: 1/31/2016 11:07:00 AM
Lovely rhyme, imagery and such a captivating story, Lin. Congratulations on your nice placement! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 1/31/2016 5:33:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Sandra.. and thanks for the hugs. ((Sandra))
Date: 1/31/2016 10:00:00 AM
Awesome work !! No wonder it is in the winners’ list. Congrats..Sara
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Date: 1/31/2016 10:08:00 AM
Thank you so much, dear, Sara. I love your new avatar.
Date: 1/31/2016 9:31:00 AM
I think we have all dreamed we could fly Lin - wonderful imagination and I love the imagery and clever rhyme:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/31/2016 9:43:00 AM
Thanks for the compliments and the hugs, Jan.. huggin' ya back.
Date: 1/31/2016 7:46:00 AM
This winning narrative poem is lively, touching, and skillfully-written. Congratulations on your win! Janice
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Date: 1/31/2016 8:22:00 AM
Thanks, Janice. I appreciate such wonderful comments.
Date: 1/31/2016 7:09:00 AM
Lin, that's quite a trip you had, and I am glad you made it back ahead of the storm. Send that bird my way, I'd like to fly with him.
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Date: 1/31/2016 7:13:00 AM
I'll see what I can do to have him fly to you, James. Thank you very much for liking this one ;)
Date: 1/31/2016 6:05:00 AM
Enjoyed every word ... Thanks for sharing.. and congrats on your win, dear Lin.
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Date: 1/31/2016 6:27:00 AM
I'm so happy you like it! Thank you so much, Archana...
Date: 1/31/2016 2:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest! Awesome imagery, fantastic poem. A 7 IMHO.
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Date: 1/31/2016 4:45:00 AM
Thank you so much, Susan. Your opinion matters to me. ;)
Date: 1/30/2016 10:38:00 PM
Very nice, and congrats on your win!
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Date: 1/31/2016 1:43:00 AM
Thank you so much, Edward ;)
Date: 1/30/2016 8:34:00 PM
Lin, congrats on your placement! *smiles* -luloo
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Date: 1/31/2016 1:42:00 AM
Thanks, Laura. I see you too have placed. I'll have to read later. lol hugs.
Date: 1/30/2016 8:02:00 PM
congrats on 2nd place Lin hugs
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Date: 1/31/2016 1:41:00 AM
Thank you very much, Shadow. I enjoyed writing for you.
Date: 1/26/2016 6:38:00 PM
well written Lin, your imagination seems real...i mean like a real fantasy, you've done an excellent poem...best of luck in the contest
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Date: 1/26/2016 6:52:00 PM
Thanks. I sure appreciate your encouraging visits, Sage.
Date: 1/26/2016 7:47:00 AM
I think your childlike imagination is a wonderful blessing. I love the poem, all kids wish they could literally fly at one time or another. It is extremely hard for me to pretend anymore. Life's been pretty brutal.
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Date: 1/26/2016 7:50:00 AM
Come on, Daniel. Close your eyes and trust that in your mind you're flying above the clouds. I hope that makes you smile. Pretending is means of escape from the brutal times we've had to endure. Thank you for your compliment of thinking like a child. I hope it lasts.

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