Notes About The Poem

*Ranket : an organ (a double-reed wind instrument of the 16th and 17th centuries.) producing a gentle, muffled tone.

Imagination

The mist fell over the lake like a grey blanket.
Only the sound similar to a ranket*
The water still and lifeless, not a ripple to be seen.
The air not foetid but fresh and clean.

And I felt a chill from the loss forever of my Bill.

Sitting in the snow, my mind void of thought.
Blocking the clarity, I so desperately sought.
Enraptured by a numbness circling my soul.
Seeking solace most peaceful and whole.

And I felt a chill from the loss forever of my Bill.

Enjoying the loneness, no wish for chatting.
Glancing I saw a large wolf come pitter patting.
I felt a hot breath behind my head.
Its eyes piercing, though I did not dread.

 I felt a chill. Said the wolf "forever with your Bill"

Without thinking I asked the creature. 
It stared at me with a chiseled facial feature.
Why are you here, what purpose do you fulfil?
Again, I asked, are you here to remind me of Bill?

I felt a chill. Said the wolf "forever with your Bill"

My dear Bill’s emblem was a wolf, a large tattoo.
Not a man saved all drowned captain and his crew.
Dear Bill working on that ill-fated ship lost at sea.
We had plans, Bill and I, he was going to marry me.

I felt a chill. Said the wolf "forever with your Bill"

I could not fathom why the wolf was here.
I spoke harshly to the beast without any fear.
Wolf what are you doing encroaching my space?
The wolf answered, gave me a blank face.

I felt a chill. Said the wolf "forever with your Bill"

Where do you emerge from canine ghost?
Are you evil, should I dread you most?
Who sent you to unsettle me and joust my mind?
You speak of my dear Bill, do you mean unkind?

I felt a chill. Said the wolf "forever with your Bill"

Again, I demanded an answer from the beast.
Surely that was what I could expect at the least.
The wolf did not answer, it just walked away.
That is the last I have seen of it, to this very day.

And I felt a chill from the loss of my Bill.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Anaya Avatar
December 4, 2023 at 9:44 AM
You captured the nuances of Plath's state of mind as she writes about in her works. An intriguing twist, SV on the Poe /Plath contest which I think should have been a Top Ten List for your efforts! "Not an easy task, but I did put my heart and soul into it" Yes you did as I did. Stay cool, I wish you no more midnight drearies! lol. Anaya
Volumes Avatar
December 4, 2023 at 10:57 AM
I am afraid I was out of my depth with this one Anaya. I was reluctant to enter, as it felt like sacrilege trying to emanate those two. Particularly Poe, who I admire greatly. Thanks for your lovely comment. I don't spend much time reading now, but I have just read your entry to the contest its very very good. I will comment now on it.
Fowler Avatar
December 4, 2023 at 7:19 AM
I always love your stories Svvie. You make them appear so real. I'm kinda chilled to the bone reading this one. Love it! :)
Empress Avatar
November 28, 2023 at 8:54 PM
You are an excellent storyteller. Love how you’ve written this and how you’ve rhymed too throughout. Deeply moving and touching poem. I felt so much reading it. Goodluck in the contest. Always a pleasure reading you
Volumes Avatar
November 28, 2023 at 11:22 PM
Thank you Empress you are so kind. You made me smile. I share your love of Poe. LOL That's why I made the wolf's approach a pitter pat. as in Poe's Raven's Ratta tat on the window..
Empress Avatar
November 28, 2023 at 9:22 PM
Ah Poe is one of my fave poets and you did it very well. One of the best iv read for the contest. I tried too but i dont think im any good haha. I loved yours. Plaths lifestory is sad. But i prefer actually poes style of writing more maybe cus ive always been a fan . Love the poem queen
Volumes Avatar
November 28, 2023 at 9:14 PM
Thank you Empress, it is loosely based on Edgar Allen Poe's The Raven. I tried to capture a meaning while in no way copying him but at the same time emanate Sylvia Plath's style as the contest requested. Not an easy task, but I did put my heart and soul into it, trying to keep it as pure poetry as possible. I really do appreciate your lovely comment.
Goldsmith Avatar
November 28, 2023 at 1:11 PM
WOW!!! What a creative/wonderful~write/picture. I love it... Have a blessed day writing away.................
Volumes Avatar
November 28, 2023 at 2:54 PM
Thanks Paula, its incredibly loosely based on Poe's The Raven. (Sorry Poe). Your comment as always is appreciated sweet Paula.
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