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Imagination - From My Chapbook "from Childhood."

Don’t waste the magic children have. They cry out in consternation at each new sensation As though bludgeoned once again by feelings earned in another life. Wail! Oh, wail! The pliable face…. Joy Sorrow Anger Disgust served up so matter-o’-factly on dulled earthenware “Sample this my boy PAIN! You must learn! A swat for your protest! One mask will you wear! To hell with awakenings! Until It’s lost the magic Then Years later seeking fulfillment A man sits him down to think to leaden drill Turning hard into the iron wall of past

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/24/2010 11:57:00 AM
ENJOYED, DAVER. Your poem is outstanding..How do u figure the form on this one..Always loving the read...
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Date: 3/19/2010 7:32:00 AM
Very interesting and deep, Daver. I see I am reading some of the contents of that book today, right? So in effect, I AM reading it already! I like it very much. I prefer this kind of writing to the mythological, although you write very well in all genres. WEll, I've got to get out the door to the gym and then on to my huge spring cleaning ahead of me. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 2/21/2010 4:29:00 AM
You've captured the feelings an imaginative child must have as he is forced to experience the world as others do. Without magic.
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Date: 1/29/2010 1:35:00 PM
I really like the movement of this fine work! Daver! thanks! jimbo
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Date: 1/29/2010 4:40:00 AM
a very interesting style you have here ,Daver. Alot going on in this write, for me at least. I guess it's where I'm at and have been for a while. Very well done , my friend. Robert
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Date: 1/28/2010 12:25:00 PM
funny, yet I can't hear over the grinding gears. LOL
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Date: 1/27/2010 9:26:00 AM
AINT IT THE TRUTH!!!! Sensational writing, Dave. Lainie
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Date: 1/27/2010 8:54:00 AM
Splendid poem, Daver! Yes here its frozen too. Tomorrow it will snow again. Thank you for your comment on "Frozen"...Love, Gert
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Date: 1/27/2010 8:24:00 AM
Interesting presentation Daver.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today
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Date: 1/27/2010 3:49:00 AM
~~~Magnificent~~~ Daver. Thank you so much for posting this one. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/26/2010 5:08:00 PM
THis calls for deep thinking and a resolve to love little children unconditionally so they can achieve all that they were put here on earth to achieve. Great write, as usual Daver! Peace and love, Audrey
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Date: 1/26/2010 1:37:00 PM
Wow! Thought provoking poem with so much depth. As always, I really like your interesting presentation--a style that works so well with your words. Well done. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for your comment. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 1/26/2010 9:47:00 AM
Well done...TAH
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Date: 1/26/2010 8:31:00 AM
When children are raised without love and kindness, we all suffer, Daver. Your poem reminded me of a Jason Mraz song "Love for a Child." I'm going to email the link to the song to you. If you feel strongly about this, it may make you weep as it did me. This is very insightful writing and should be mandatory reading for all parents! Much love, Carolyn
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