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Images I Cannot Forget

I was four and felt I died before in that inclined place nothing but space I ran up to hug my mom in a haze of deaf and dumb... ...it was not her... it was my mom from before... combing her hair was a task as I could not believe she was just a mask...

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Date: 4/14/2011 11:39:00 PM
I see this is a win from some time ago. Wow, congratulations with this one, Iolanda. Oh, and I have to tell you, I finally viewed that utube video about the acrobats, the sexy man and woman. Superb performers!!
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Date: 7/8/2010 7:12:00 AM
Congratulations Iolanda on your win in Frank Herrera's contest "Images". Love, Carol
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Date: 7/8/2010 2:19:00 AM
I have had that happen too. You have expressed it so vividly with this winning rhyme. Congratulations, Iolanda. Love, Lainie
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Date: 7/7/2010 5:35:00 AM
Congrats Iolanda on your HM in the Images contest with this astoounding write and special honor for u to enjoy.. I answered your blog question about my 'honey poo' on the blog too..sweetie.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii.. AlohA..
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Date: 7/6/2010 6:25:00 PM
Excellent Iolanda ..and good luck.. Frank is judging tonight.. I wanted to let u know some vacation photos from Hawaii and from the seashore in Jersey have been posted on my new blog tonight.. we have hundreds of photos from both places.. so I put on what Soup could handle and hope u enjoy a little taste of island magic ... AlohA... more to be posted in a few days after Souprs view these.. luv.. "Sweetheart" in Hawaii.. AlohA..
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Date: 7/6/2010 3:58:00 PM
Thank you for sharing your poetry with us here at PoetrySoup Iolanda. I hope you plan on being here and writing for years to come. It was a pleasure to read your poetry today. Wishing you the best always. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/6/2010 7:39:00 AM
This would be an image a child would keep hidden away in her young mind. This should do well!! Good luck, Iolanda!
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Date: 7/6/2010 12:40:00 AM
this is very moving, big talent here, blessings x
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