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Can you hear it in the ceaseless pounding surf.. as the wind rails against the crags… in the silence of the firmament? Can you see it in a child’s trusting smile… in the pools of morning light… in a wing against the sky? . With whispered step, and open hand Hope unveils its shining face.

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Date: 12/6/2008 8:16:00 AM
This is beautiful! I love the imagery here that you conveyed! I could hear it, and see it, as well... lovely. My favorite line: "Hope unveils its shining face." Full of inspiration. Thank you :) for your kind comments, and have a blessed holiday season. Amy
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Date: 12/3/2008 10:44:00 AM
Hi Barbra.. I liked the way in which this began with a simple stated question... and how it drew me into reading.. and the imagery created after flowed.... careful and clever writing !
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Date: 12/3/2008 1:22:00 AM
Outstanding poetry, every line is brilliant. Yes, I can see it clearly. Love, Nigel
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Date: 12/2/2008 2:50:00 AM
I see it! I can see it in everything. well said, this is just awesome. love, Kristin
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Date: 12/1/2008 8:32:00 PM
An inspirational...hopeful poem. Nicely done, and uplifting! ~ Carrie
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