Image of Lies

I lay asleep in bed 
wanting to sneak away, 
splitting the curtains of 
reflection hue rainbows
of dawn to dark sunlight. 
Instead I find myself
in a cold confined maze.
Shadows in black mourning;
I shout once than over 
but no one would answer. 

Rage assails no reason. 
Tortured dreams hard to wake 
from screams and fear suppressed.

Grieve I am trying so
hard to put behind me.

I awake slumbersome
and walk into the room
they are in black mourning.

My body's soul had left
me lying in bed while 
it wandered. Thoughts of my
state almost despising
where image dream of lies
grievous mania strives.

10/24/2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Dietrich Avatar
October 25, 2017 at 3:20 PM
Very descriptive writing, Eve. Is it for the mania contest? It could also be the "dark" poem asked for by Laura Loo!
Roper Avatar
October 25, 2017 at 6:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea, it is for the Maina... wrote the other for Laura.. Hugs Eve ~`*
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October 25, 2017 at 1:26 PM
Fabulously unsettling pen! Fantastic for the contest. Best to you xomo!
Roper Avatar
October 25, 2017 at 5:59 PM
Thank you, Maureen, Hugs Eve ~`*
Hoffman Avatar
October 25, 2017 at 8:05 AM
An awesome deep creative write Eve! Good luck in the contest!~Che :)
Roper Avatar
October 25, 2017 at 5:55 PM
Thank you, Cheryl, for the compliment and the good-luck :) Hugs Eve ~`*
Pandit Avatar
October 25, 2017 at 7:57 AM
Full of imagination and thoughts of grief--feels sad!
Roper Avatar
October 25, 2017 at 5:54 PM
Thank you, Vijay, true story :( Hugs Eve ~`*
One Avatar
October 25, 2017 at 5:49 AM
Woah Eve this is deep poetry and I love poetry when it is deep.. A poem in which the subject is fighting against themselves with no real solution.. Excellent write..
Roper Avatar
October 25, 2017 at 5:54 PM
Thank you,Silent One Hugs Eve ~`*
Sivey Avatar
October 25, 2017 at 3:19 AM
Wow, this is very good, I surely loved reading this wondrous and delightfully penned write this morning! You have captured the essence of pain and suffering in a different light, I really loved that! What an expressive and emotive piece my friend! Great Work!!
Roper Avatar
October 25, 2017 at 5:53 PM
Thank you so much , Russell...Hugs Eve ~`*
Vaso Avatar
October 24, 2017 at 9:46 PM
oh I can sure relate to this one, loved this poem Eve!!
Roper Avatar
October 24, 2017 at 9:58 PM
thank you sweet friend Hugs Eve ~`*
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