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Image of Lies

I lay asleep in bed wanting to sneak away, splitting the curtains of reflection hue rainbows of dawn to dark sunlight. Instead I find myself in a cold confined maze. Shadows in black mourning; I shout once than over but no one would answer. Rage assails no reason. Tortured dreams hard to wake from screams and fear suppressed. Grieve I am trying so hard to put behind me. I awake slumbersome and walk into the room they are in black mourning. My body's soul had left me lying in bed while it wandered. Thoughts of my state almost despising where image dream of lies grievous mania strives. 10/24/2017

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Date: 10/25/2017 3:20:00 PM
Very descriptive writing, Eve. Is it for the mania contest? It could also be the "dark" poem asked for by Laura Loo!
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Eve Roper
Date: 10/25/2017 6:00:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea, it is for the Maina... wrote the other for Laura.. Hugs Eve ~`*
Date: 10/25/2017 1:26:00 PM
Fabulously unsettling pen! Fantastic for the contest. Best to you xomo!
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Eve Roper
Date: 10/25/2017 5:59:00 PM
Thank you, Maureen, Hugs Eve ~`*
Date: 10/25/2017 8:05:00 AM
An awesome deep creative write Eve! Good luck in the contest!~Che :)
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Eve Roper
Date: 10/25/2017 5:55:00 PM
Thank you, Cheryl, for the compliment and the good-luck :) Hugs Eve ~`*
Date: 10/25/2017 7:57:00 AM
Full of imagination and thoughts of grief--feels sad!
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Eve Roper
Date: 10/25/2017 5:54:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay, true story :( Hugs Eve ~`*
Date: 10/25/2017 5:49:00 AM
Woah Eve this is deep poetry and I love poetry when it is deep.. A poem in which the subject is fighting against themselves with no real solution.. Excellent write..
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Eve Roper
Date: 10/25/2017 5:54:00 PM
Thank you,Silent One Hugs Eve ~`*
Date: 10/25/2017 3:19:00 AM
Wow, this is very good, I surely loved reading this wondrous and delightfully penned write this morning! You have captured the essence of pain and suffering in a different light, I really loved that! What an expressive and emotive piece my friend! Great Work!!
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Eve Roper
Date: 10/25/2017 5:53:00 PM
Thank you so much , Russell...Hugs Eve ~`*
Date: 10/24/2017 9:46:00 PM
oh I can sure relate to this one, loved this poem Eve!!
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Eve Roper
Date: 10/24/2017 9:58:00 PM
thank you sweet friend Hugs Eve ~`*

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