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I'M Not Sure If It's a Dud But It Went Thud

Some monsters were mashing in a vault Then Caspar screamed "it wasn't my fault" Dracula turned on the light To reveal Halloween fright Old Frankie lost his head with loose bolt

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Silent One

Date: 10/25/2023 11:03:00 AM

Nice to see your humorous side..

Di11y Da11y
Date: 10/25/2023 1:23:00 PM

I'm hilarious SO, you've been missing out :)

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 10/25/2023 10:49:00 AM

This one made me laugh. These monsters were my friends in chilhood. I enjoyed reading this.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 10/25/2023 1:24:00 PM

I think my meter is slightly off in some of these but they are fun to write. I make myself laugh with the nonsense I come up with :)