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I'm not a sunbather, but

Sometimes Poetic minds are pools And we dive in It's beautiful To be appreciated The poetic beads on your skin Dry in the sunshine As you bask, feeling fine Immersion really is All the love

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Paul Willason

Date: 2/27/2024 4:10:00 AM

A little gem...an infectious joy comes through in your words or shines throuh in between them.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 2/27/2024 2:31:00 PM

Thank you Paul - wandering amongst poets can be wonderful

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 2/24/2024 11:21:00 PM

That's a great tribute to poets. It is refreshing to finish a poem. Thank you.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 2/25/2024 12:30:00 AM

Thanks Hilda

Speaks Volumes

Date: 2/24/2024 7:41:00 PM

I guess appreciation comes only a second to self satisfaction and pride in ones own ability. I will offer the second. total appreciation. The warmth of the sun drying those glistening drops on the skin is so delightful as is your poem... Wen

Di11y Da11y
Date: 2/25/2024 12:30:00 AM

Thank you Wen - it's just fascinating that the way words are strung together can be so joyful to experience :)