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I'M Missing You

I’m supposed to be happy But I feel so blue Can’t get you out of my head Can’t stop thinking of you My tears fall like rain My heart filled with pain Oh when oh when will I see you again Jan Allison 30th October 2014

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Emily Hinchman

Date: 11/3/2014 10:27:00 AM

I really love the simplicity in your words and rhymes to display your feelings in your poem!! (:

Jan Allison
Date: 11/3/2014 10:33:00 AM

Thanks Emily it is a very difficult and emotional period in my life at the moment:-( hugs Jan xx

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 10/31/2014 3:31:00 PM

I am sure this trip is very bitter sweet for you. Just keep writing your emotions and enjoy as much as you possibly can. XOXO

Jan Allison
Date: 10/31/2014 3:38:00 PM

You are very perceptive my friend - I am having a wonderful time - I thought with being away I could 'escape' ...but only my physical body has but not my heart:-( Hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/31/2014 1:44:00 PM

- Sweet and sad, Jan - Happy Halloween! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 10/31/2014 3:34:00 PM

Thanks Anne Lise:-) Happy Halloween:-) Hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 10/31/2014 11:49:00 AM

Still on vacation, I see, no wonder your lonely. It is all ways nice to go away but after the 2nd day you miss home. love and hugs eve

Jan Allison
Date: 10/31/2014 1:56:00 PM

We all miss Lucy and now of course we have lost Freddie - I too am writing many emotional poems at the moment - we have so many issues and sadness at times - life is tough isn't it:-( Hugs hugs hugs Janxx

Eve Roper
Date: 10/31/2014 12:50:00 PM

My heart and prayers are with you. My thoughts are still on my cousin Lucy. I think that is why I have been writing poems. And I just found out day before yesterday a good friend and her husband went head on with a logging truck so I too have been kind of down I just wrote “Hearts Emotions”.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/31/2014 11:55:00 AM

My dad is terminally ill Eve and I miss a friend so so much but I am having a wonderful time and recharging my batteries as I know tough times are ahead:-( Hugs jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 10/31/2014 3:03:00 AM

Good morning Jan! This poem is short and touching. We all get moments like that, and I can understand how you feel...but we all need a tiny break, even from pain. Hope this morning sunshine will brighten up your spirits. Hugs // paul

Paul Callus
Date: 10/31/2014 11:50:00 AM

wow...and I adore their date and walnut cakes!!!

Jan Allison
Date: 10/31/2014 9:03:00 AM

Thanks Paul. I'm bright and breezy - went to Fontanelle tea rooms and had some cake - wow wow wow I'm in loveeeeeeeeee with that place:-) Hugs Jan

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/30/2014 6:17:00 PM

I am so sorry you are having a sad day Jan. I love this little poem. It fits in to a new form I am trying to have accepted. You know you can always mail me if you need to talk, you won't get any good advice but I will be able to confuse you long enough to give you a break from your pain. I Love You! Smile you're in Malta.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/30/2014 6:20:00 PM

Aww Maurice where would I be without wonderful people like you to boost my spirits and make me smile :-) Thanks for the kind offer - love you too my friend:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Casarah Nance

Date: 10/30/2014 5:43:00 PM

Hugs we all just need some love today.. more hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 10/30/2014 5:47:00 PM

Thanks Cas - I am torn between heart and home at the moment:-( I think we are all in need of a massive 'hug in' today. Just posted a collaboration poem - I am meeting Paul on Sunday am sooooo excited:-) Hugs Jan xx

Dan Helppi

Date: 10/30/2014 5:38:00 PM

Jan, I hope you feel better, sometimes we remember people and who they were and other people do too and then at that needful time they tell you. And that is a little piece of that person living on, passing between spirits of other people. You will surely see and feel what I mean sometime. Have this from me-Love

Jan Allison
Date: 10/30/2014 5:42:00 PM

I'm on holiday Dan my dad is at home he has terminal cancer and i also am missing a special friend:-) Hugs jan xxx

Gary Bateman

Date: 10/30/2014 4:06:00 PM

This one is a sad one Jan, but I know why. Our prayers are with you and your family, and hope some release of pain for your father. Best Wishes Always, Gary

Gary Bateman
Date: 11/1/2014 6:34:00 PM

I'm glad to hear this Jan. I know it is very hard, but you have family, friends, and your friend and colleagues here from PoetrySoup in your corner!! Keep writing as Brenda mentions in reply at the top. Writing and expressing your feeling always helps. God Bless!! Gary

Jan Allison
Date: 10/30/2014 4:08:00 PM

Thankfully dad has no pain Gary but I carry so much in my heart:-( Hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 10/30/2014 3:02:00 PM

This so sad Jan...Everyone is hurting today...hugs Tim

Jan Allison
Date: 10/30/2014 4:07:00 PM

Maybe you should re-phrase that Tim lol:-) hugs Jan xxx

Tim Smith
Date: 10/30/2014 3:19:00 PM

Thanks Jan I have it up for Halloween :) ....hugs Tim

Jan Allison
Date: 10/30/2014 3:17:00 PM

Thanks Tim and I LOVE the new avatar that sure made me smile:-) Hugs Jan xxx

David Meade

Date: 10/30/2014 2:11:00 PM

Very moving, the longing of the heart, raw and vulnerable are our emotions when loved one are out of sight especially when it is unknown when you were meet again . . . I had this feeling many years ago when my dad was dying of cancer . . . I was never sure if the visit was going to be the last visit. All the best.

Jan Allison
Date: 10/30/2014 3:16:00 PM

My dad has terminal cancer David and I'm on holiday and I am also missing a dear dear friend :-) Hugs Jan x