I'M Just Getting Started

There is a song 
Within the human voice
A song that speaks of endeavoring beyond
The limits we all have in place
To test the meaning of our mettle
To strive and push for the elements
That define our spirit
Lest we forget who we are

A song of discovery in the face of being lost
A song of triumph in the face of failure
A song of strength in the face of hardship
Of determination in the face of fear
A song of faith in the heart of treachery
A song of ourselves as we sing aloud
"I'm just getting started"
For my road is empty without my attempt

My worth is naught unless it is challenged
By the choices that are mine



September 23, 2019
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Peterson Avatar
October 4, 2019 at 6:16 PM
This is splendid poetry and excellent in portrayal, having been made present through the artistry of your hand. Impressive!
Blodgett Avatar
October 12, 2019 at 6:22 PM
Thank you so much Mark. You are very kind Lonna
Mcgee Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 8:33 PM
Love that second verse Lonna...a song of discovery in the face of being lost, a song of triumph in the face of failure...congrats on your top placement.
Blodgett Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 10:35 PM
Thanks Jeanne. Always enjoy your wonderful comments. Lonna
Adams Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 7:06 PM
Nicely penned, congratulations on your fine win :)
Blodgett Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 1:39 PM
Thank you Sandra. Lonna
Gauthier Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 2:58 PM
Congrats on your win, Lonna. Well done.
Blodgett Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 3:12 PM
Line I so appreciate your continued comments and encouragement. Lots of hugs. Lonna
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 1:48 PM
It's like a lyric deserving for its honors ~ Aloha always William
Blodgett Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 2:27 PM
Thanks William. That's music to my ears. Lonna
La France Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 1:31 PM
Lona congratulations on your win in the contest with this excellent poem!
Blodgett Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 2:26 PM
Thank you so much Dear Heart. Truly appreciate your comments. Lonna
Peterson Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 1:22 PM
You lend carefully chosen words to thoughts that bear deep reflection. Such a good use of my time to read them.
Blodgett Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 2:21 PM
Thank you Mark. I appreciate your comment. Lonna
Hamilton Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 1:00 PM
Wonderful write Lonna, congrats on a fine placement in my premium contest
Blodgett Avatar
September 24, 2019 at 2:21 PM
Thanks John. I have always been motivated by songs. Lonna
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