Im Fine

I'm Fine two Words in one Lie What do you say when your scratching at you scars, soaking your pillow with tears, or thinking your the captain of a ship and sinking down, down, down, Thinking you let every one down Thinking you have No Hope Why do you say "I'm fine?" Are you embarrassed? Is it personal?, Or do you not want anybody to get involved? When you say you're "fine" it means you wanna be in bed bawling your eyes out because you think it's Never going to get better, but trust me it will all be Fine in the end

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Weston Gregory

Date: 6/25/2018 8:57:00 PM

Nice... Like the way it zero in on a possible reason" not want other involve... serious stuff...u did good my girl...

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 5/22/2018 9:58:00 AM

It s a really beautiful poem and an enjoyable one to read, you see that we might be hurt but there s no point in telling everyone that hey you know I m hurt, only tell it to the people who you know are sincair to you, your parents perhaps,share with God, write it down, writing helps, plus past is in past, what s gone can t be returned, forget about it, focus on future, the past may be dead but future can be bright good luck and welcome to poetrysoup

Sil Ng

Date: 5/21/2018 8:09:00 PM

Omg! This is amazing! I love your word choice and the style in which you write! Keep doing what you're doing and don't stop being a great poet!