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I'M Buzzing Off

"Buzz... buzz," said the bee and I. We're both ready to be set free. A poem was here but spread its wings to fly because the soup tastes like a catastrophe.

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Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 1/11/2018 6:20:00 PM

Please don't let a couple of bad flowers chase you off ... there's always sweet pollen to be found, and most bees don't sting, but when they DO, they just end up hurting themselves. You have so much poetry honey yet to produce, and I, for one, wish to taste of its nectarous substance! :-) <3

Lin Lane
Date: 1/11/2018 10:33:00 PM

You never offend me in any way Greg. You're very sensitive and have always treated me with respect. Thank you for seeing me as one of the 'good folks.' Mutual admiration. ;-)

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/11/2018 6:54:00 PM

I'm sorry if I phrased anything indelicately ... I'm being selfish, cuz I want you to stay. I haven't been here long, so I haven't seen all that's gone on, but I know you're one of the good folks, and I'll miss you and your work here. Again, I'm being selfish ... I respect your decision, but I'm saddened. :-(

Lin Lane
Date: 1/11/2018 6:29:00 PM

No one is chasing me off, Greg. I'll be leaving when my PM has expired because I'll not let my money go to waste while I'm still able to post images with my writes. I've lost interest in the site with the shenanigans that take place. My time is best spent with my new interests. I appreciate your kind concern, but I've not been stung by anyone who matters to me. Thanks so much.

CayCay Jennings

Date: 1/11/2018 5:31:00 PM

Most cute, but for reasons not entirely clear I said, 'uh oh, oh my.' Do I want clarity? I'll ponder. All the best ... CayCay

CayCay Jennings
Date: 1/12/2018 7:44:00 AM

You are dear, too! I'll never forget to remember you and your awesome, inspiring talent. Be well, all the days be well. Poetry hugs that will tug a missing ... CayCay

Lin Lane
Date: 1/11/2018 6:27:00 PM

Hi, CayCay. I've been clarifying my thoughts for some time and always come to the same conclusion. You're a dear lady. Thanks for reading.

Ilene Bauer

Date: 1/11/2018 5:06:00 PM

it sounds like there's a problem on the site, lin - am i correct? i guess i'm not on here enough to catch some of the nastiness i've read about in other people's poems or comments, but i hope you're not really "buzzing off." i'd really miss your writing...

Lin Lane
Date: 1/11/2018 6:26:00 PM

There are several problems on the site, Ilene. My stinger is twitching...lol Thanks for reading.