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Even if you don’t care I’ll tell you where I’ve been I took a break for a while, now I’m back ready to share my pen Ready to take revenge on every and anyone who fake cared for him I’m back now so it doesn’t matter about where I’ve been My words will cause an earthquake and leave you trembling My words can hit harder than a beat from Dr Dre or timberland Being nice gets you nowhere so I’m done with that People have opinions of me but you can’t run from facts Had to let go of my pain because there was a lot to hold For the first time in my life I feel like I’ve got control So I don’t need to search for a pot of gold Born without a brain, became heartless, but never lost my soul I’ve got over 1000 poems finished ready to share, with multi syllable, double and triple rhymes And I dedicate them all to the teachers who said I had a little mind Why should I dumb it down? You should smarten up This world is too sensitive most of you need to harden up I take everything as a compliment even if it comes with bad words Got bullied for being bipolar, but I already knew I was mad first Anxiety gets anxiety for having to deal with me Depression told me I put up too much of a fight, that’s why it’s no longer still with me I’ll always take the L if we talk about where we sin You focus on my losses; I’ll make sure you know on where I win I’ve got lyrically better and am ready to share my pen I’m back now, so it doesn’t matter about where I’ve been

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 3/12/2017 8:40:00 PM
Alex. Welcome back to Poetry Soup. Speak the truth. Rock and Roll, Hit and Spin, Bump and Run. Show no mercy. Proceed with abandon. Everything is everything as long as you keep shouting it. Scorn upon the non-believers, Cheers, Doug.
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Alex Duffy
Date: 3/12/2017 9:31:00 PM
Thank you, im glad to be back :) That's what im going to do, success is the best revenge :) thank you
Date: 3/12/2017 4:36:00 AM
Tech. glitch, my comment was repeated ...one from me is more than enough...lol
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Date: 3/12/2017 4:36:00 AM
Yes you are! I love the fierce, take charge attitude of 'this is who I am and where I'm going'. I wanted to read your first poem after reading your great piece "Letter to Eminem" to get a feel for your poetry...and wow..do I ever! This rocks..You rock, for all you have been through yes, but more importantly, for who you are right now.:-) You have much to be proud of Alex, this is incredibly powerful writing.:-) blessings, lynn
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Alex Duffy
Date: 3/12/2017 9:30:00 PM
Thank you so much, yeah once you've beat down, you have to come back with an attitude of "This is me, accept it or not" lol, I'm so glad you like my poetry thank you so much :)
Date: 2/15/2017 7:07:00 AM
There's a lot of force in them there words. Look forward to seeing some more.
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Alex Duffy
Date: 2/21/2017 6:22:00 PM
Yeah I put a lot of anger and emotion in them, thank you
Date: 2/14/2017 2:25:00 PM
So deep and cool and edgy and raw !!!! FANTASTIC !!!!!!!!!!!! TOP ratings !! ~~JEANIE ~~
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Alex Duffy
Date: 2/21/2017 6:22:00 PM
Thank you so much :) I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
Date: 1/21/2017 2:06:00 PM
Powerfully written.
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Alex Duffy
Date: 1/23/2017 3:29:00 AM
thank you :)

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