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I'M a Redbud Tree

I’m a Redbud Tree Once I was a sapling With four thin trunks from the ground, Hot pink blossoms clung to the forks, Of shoots of tiny branches. And I grew. One trunk made a branch And there was room for five, Thriving, red, I was lovely, My leaves heart shaped. And i grew. Until one trunk became diseased, And then there were four; Invisible tears fell to the ground, Though the tiny branches dressed with leaves. And I grew. I thrived and blossomed and matured, But then, one by one, Trunks and branch said goodbye, One strong trunk held an umbrella of blossoms, Until My umbrella broke and fell to the ground, My one trunk left is brittle still standing, I am weak, I am waiting for my cycle to complete, Nature is ever changing.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 10/17/2017 7:45:00 AM
Lovely imagery, Sunlite, I liked it:)
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 10/17/2017 9:20:00 AM
Thank you, Jo.
Date: 10/13/2017 8:23:00 AM
Beautiful write my friend, though it really is a sad one! Is this a revelation upon life, the cycle that we all go through...the maturity until we break and fall apart! I loved the inferences! What a grandiose piece, Great Work!!
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 10/13/2017 9:39:00 AM
Yes it's about a life, Russell. Thank you for commenting - you are always so encouraging.
Date: 10/12/2017 10:21:00 PM
This is quite original and creative..well written SW!
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 10/13/2017 9:38:00 AM
Thank you so much, Vijay.
Date: 10/12/2017 9:32:00 PM
Oh a very touching poem, the cycle of life so beautiful and yet so sad. Lovely poem!
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 10/13/2017 9:38:00 AM
You've got it, Arthur! I always appreciate your comments.
Date: 10/12/2017 8:05:00 PM
Hey, this looks like it might be one for that new contest, but I'm thinking it was a sonnet contest? anyway, this is a great idea to write about this dear tree and how it finally broke. The picture of it is so nice too.
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 10/13/2017 9:35:00 AM
Not for a contest, Andrea. Thank you for your interest.

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