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Poetry/Free Verse/I'm a Dreamer
Copyright Protected, ID 03-1628-213-07
All Rights Reserved, 2024, Constance La France 

Written, March 7, 2024
For the International Contest, A World Without War
Sponsor,  Anoucheka Gangabisoon, Judged 04/07/2024

Third Place

"I have a dream . . . " Quote by _Martin Luther King, Jr. Just like Martin Luther king I have a dream too, mine is to see this world without war; with people living in peace and sharing in all, yes, I am a dreamer. It would be so nice to have a world of one, with no war, killing, or battles for land; a world where every single person felt safe from death, yes, I am a dreamer. There would be no need for greed, hate, or war, for every country would work for one goal; world peace and brotherhood and sharing for all, yes, I am a dreamer. It would be wonderful if we could work as one, not just to eliminate war, but world pollution too; concentrate on things like global warming issues, yes, I am a dreamer.

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Date: 3/8/2024 6:12:00 AM
such a beautiful poem. I'm a dreamer, too, perhaps because I'm a byproduct of the 60s and 70s. I especially liked the last verse...'working as one.' I still believe it's possible if we can put our individual egos and needs aside. Have a pleasant Friday, Sara
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Date: 3/7/2024 5:59:00 PM
Love how you patterned your poem around the phrase "I'm a dreamer," Dear Heart.
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Date: 3/7/2024 5:22:00 PM
Dear Constance, Your poem echoes the timeless vision of peace and unity. Your amazing dream is filled with the longing for a world free from conflict and filled with harmony. Your words inspire hope and show us of the importance of collective action towards a shared goal. This is a wonderful dream you shared with us and igniting the flame of possibility. - Blessings, Daniel
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