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I'Ll Show You

I'll Show You. I want to show you. Just where my head is. Where my mental notes. Write you into existence. Where your ticking. Is the very essence. That keeps my time alive. I want to show you. Where my heart is. Where my beating rain. Pours you into my felicity. Where a future without you. Shreds the wings of angels. Making them mortal. I want to show you. Where my love is. Where my yearning gates. Open you into my amour. Where in the light. You shine brighter than the brightest star. I want to show you. Where my trust is. Where my faithful walls. Collapse you into my certainty. Where in the dark. You shine showing me my way out. I'll show you. Because my words. Are the sand I walk upon. I’ll show you. Because my actions. Are the foundation to a truth. I’ll show you. Because I care. I'll show you. Because I love you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/5/2016 9:52:00 PM
nice to see this one again, Douglas, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT*
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Date: 7/30/2013 10:10:00 AM
- Hello new member: Douglas. - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thank you for choosing to share your poems here with us. - I look forward to reading more in the future. - Have a good time and I wish you luck. - (Give and receive comments) - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/27/2013 8:24:00 AM
Douglas, this is very sweet...... love is a wonderful SHOW... amazing write... keep posting... LINDA
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Date: 7/26/2013 5:24:00 PM
Douglas, a wonderful way to show your love. enjoying your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, I love it!! Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless..... Hugs* SKAT
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