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I'll Let You In........... - Rick Parise - (( collaboration * Rick Parise )) by~ RICK PARISE When jealousy is thrown out the door and compromise is welcomed in, it is then a novel of strewn pages empty and silent shall reap enraptured song For our love of bitter regrets and expectations shall fall with the setting sun And within that early morning light a new love shall rise victorious where promise endeavors and soft shadows lie by~ POET D. The guardian of our love has risen once again I share with you my love the sun and moon Two rivals as we hold hands The vigilantist in your eyes, will now kiss me softly Like a flower our new love will bloom Win or lose, you are the one I choose And within that midnight light our love will confuse no more promise will overcome insecurities faithfulness will soften all A Collaboration with *RICK PARISE ~MY COLLABORATION CONTEST~

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Date: 9/21/2011 12:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your co-write win in P.D.'s "Collaborate With Me" contest ^RIck. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/17/2011 9:17:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of P.D., Rick
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Date: 9/17/2011 8:45:00 AM
A wonderful colab and win, congrats my friend....always Michael
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Date: 9/17/2011 3:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your accomplished place in the contest "collaborate with me"...CR
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Date: 9/16/2011 1:14:00 PM
Many congrats on all your wins, Rick : )
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Date: 9/16/2011 11:07:00 AM
great job congrats on your win..cory
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Date: 9/16/2011 8:08:00 AM
Congrats Rick on a fantastic win with this collab with PD.. superb blending of two great poets to convey a superb message luv.. how is my friend these days?
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Date: 9/16/2011 1:52:00 AM
Rick, Congratulations with your entry... a joy working with you... thank you,..p.d.
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Date: 7/26/2011 10:28:00 AM
Wonderful collaboration taking the thread smoothly. Rick I have corrected my typo committed in your last name, but Rick, typos are sometimes a blessing read my Sijo "Typos" Typos Typos are very important to all the written forms. It gives the reader ample opportunities to look for something So they aren't distracted by lack of content in your writing.... Agree you rightly caught me hahahahah!!!!!!!!
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Date: 7/26/2011 8:35:00 AM
this has "winner" written all over it...great collaboration Rick and Poet D. good luck in this contest!!
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