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If You Knew

I loved you until poetry turned into a jungle. I loved you until the words cut my flesh inconsistently if I could still lay an eye on it, if you could hear me, I would tell you how I carved your name on green arms of the Ocean, I carved it with my last wish on the floor of the sea. if I could still talk, if you knew how to listen, I would tell you everything what is love but today it is nothing else than a conception of your dreams.

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Date: 9/9/2023 7:34:00 PM
“How i carved your name on the green arms of the ocean “ whoa. Thats creative and a unique line. I can feel so many emotions as i read this, wishing hoping and those if onlys, truly are touching. Been there felt this. Resonates . Pleasure reading you talented poetess
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Elena Mihalachi
Date: 9/27/2023 6:10:00 AM
Thank you so much ^_^
Date: 7/5/2023 6:42:00 PM
lovely and poetic, thanks for sharing :)
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Elena Mihalachi
Date: 7/6/2023 4:27:00 PM
Thank you

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