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If You Hear Silence

if you hear silence say hi before it becomes a grim spoken word May 17, 2018

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Valsa George

Date: 5/8/2022 5:32:00 AM

Wisely said Vijay ! A 'Hi' can thaw silence and bitterness !

Vladislav Raven

Date: 11/5/2018 10:02:00 AM

Hi Vijay, such sage words to flow from your pen onto the page. A Senryu worth the reading my friend. Sometimes it is better to fill the silence before the storm breaks. Have a wonderful Monday. your friend always....Mike.

J.W. Earnings

Date: 5/28/2018 5:55:00 AM

Silently super cool. (:tried to be clever...hehe written so well. -JWE

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/28/2018 6:03:00 AM

Thank you JW..appreciate your feedback.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 5/20/2018 6:16:00 AM

Silence may be good, but a well placed word, even better. Have a great day Vijay

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/20/2018 8:48:00 AM

You are so right..thank you Pixie. A great day to you as well.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/19/2018 3:23:00 PM

you have my 'hi' always, vijay!... charmed by this... huggs

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/19/2018 4:37:00 PM

Thank you nette.

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/19/2018 12:09:00 PM

Well written Vijay ! Good point :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/19/2018 4:37:00 PM

Thank you Heidi.

Paul Callus

Date: 5/19/2018 8:59:00 AM

A clever senryu, Vijay. Silence can be golden, as it's oft said, but not the silence before a storm! Best to calm down the situation. Regards // paul

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/19/2018 4:37:00 PM

Thank you Paul.

Joseph May

Date: 5/19/2018 7:04:00 AM

Well expressed Vijay...

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/19/2018 7:07:00 AM

Thank you Joseph.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 5/19/2018 6:24:00 AM

three lines that eat each other up. I like it.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/19/2018 7:07:00 AM

Thank you Pixie.

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 5/19/2018 1:19:00 AM

Indeed, silence is serene and graceful expression! Silence speaks volumes! An expressive, elegant Senryu dear Vijay. Always a great joy to read your beauties. Shine and Stay blessed always.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 5/19/2018 6:13:00 AM

Many thanks Besma--appreciate your kind feedback.