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If You Hear Me Now

Oh, for long have I known, and heard its moan This dark zone wails while I stand all alone Where nights of yore your memories evoke When saddened tears choke as emotions stoke Stilling me there on the freeway we chose Alas, those feelings, are still caught in throes And decline hand of grace that extends hope So, this lonesome life, on its own, must cope Amid moans and wails, till this shroud is gone For the night that howls, will always find dawn And sun too will rise, to sweet songs of lark And rays-gold, will gleam, to light-up the dark If you hear me now, dear, will you please call When I hold your hand, we'll end reign of gall If you hear me now, dear, tell me how soon Oh, tell me how soon, moon for us will croon April 8, 2021 Ten syllables per line (howmanysyllables.com)

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Date: 1/28/2022 4:57:00 AM
"If you hear me now, dear, tell me how soon Oh, tell me how soon, moon for us will croon' Love the whole poem especially this highly alliterative concluding couplet !
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Date: 12/8/2021 8:16:00 AM
Great range of emotions, leaving the reader with sweet songs of hope!
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Date: 7/30/2021 10:08:00 AM
Very nice, Vijay! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 7/29/2021 4:28:00 AM
A beautifully created couplet. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 4/28/2021 1:50:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Vijay. Well-deserved. BW ~ Mala
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Date: 4/28/2021 11:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write. Have a blessed day writing away...............
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Date: 4/28/2021 5:59:00 AM
Congratulations!
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Date: 4/27/2021 11:44:00 PM
Appropriate enticements for two, Vijay, couplets ... that is, evoking romance its chance, my gratitude for your participation, and my compliments for your win, Aloha!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/28/2021 6:10:00 AM
Much appreciate, William--many thanks.
Date: 4/9/2021 6:36:00 PM
This is a wonderful couplet, Vijay. A definite winner for sure :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/10/2021 5:09:00 AM
Thank you Angela--much appreciate.
Date: 4/9/2021 12:19:00 PM
Amazing poetry and I foresee a definite top win with this gem. Blessings and hugs Vijay, Jennifer.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/9/2021 1:49:00 PM
Thank you Jennifer--much appreciate.
Date: 4/9/2021 8:58:00 AM
Hi Vijay, You have penned some well-written couplets with good content and imagery. After such a plea, it just had to be heard. Excellent job. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day and weekend:-) Alexis
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/9/2021 10:46:00 AM
Thank you Alexis--much appreciate, as always.
Date: 4/9/2021 6:29:00 AM
Excellent piece, as always! Good luck in the contest, Vijay:-)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/9/2021 6:50:00 AM
Honored by your visit and comments my friend. Much appreciate. Many thanks.
Date: 4/8/2021 7:40:00 PM
This is beautiful and emotional, all at the same time. That tender ache to be heard, to be in a place of hope. Your thoughts caress softly around me and my heart. ~ Brandy
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/9/2021 6:49:00 AM
Always a joy to read your comments my friend. Much appreciate. Many thanks, Brandy.
Date: 4/8/2021 4:24:00 PM
Hello Vijay Pandit, I just read this poem. I hope you win the contest. enjoy your evening my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/9/2021 11:57:00 AM
You are welcome Vijay. enjoy your day my friend.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/9/2021 6:48:00 AM
Glad you stopped by with your kind remarks, Darlene. Much appreciate. Many thanks.
Date: 4/8/2021 11:45:00 AM
Your couplets adorn the emotions felt in this beautiful verse. Love and longing so mightily expressed. Plus wonderful couplets.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/9/2021 6:47:00 AM
Thank you Victor. Much appreciate, as always.
Date: 4/8/2021 11:14:00 AM
Who wouldn't answer your call with such beautiful symmetrical poetry. Much loved your verse today Vijay, sending you quiet blessings and a smile :) from afar.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/9/2021 6:47:00 AM
Thank you my friend for your blessings and smile. Much appreciate your visit and comments, Vienna. Many thanks.
Date: 4/8/2021 11:08:00 AM
Beautiful rhyming and expression of yearning throughout the poem. Very nice Vijay :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/9/2021 6:46:00 AM
Appreciate your support, as always, Heidi. Many thanks for your visit and kind feedback.
Date: 4/8/2021 10:23:00 AM
Excellent rhyming couplets of a love lost captured well in your verse Vijay.. Best of luck in the contest. Hope you're well Tom
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/9/2021 6:45:00 AM
So nice to hear that from you Tom. Much appreciate your visit and comments. Many thanks.
Date: 4/8/2021 10:22:00 AM
Vijay, this is a really lovely poem--full of vividly expressed emotions of love and longing. Janice
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 4/9/2021 6:44:00 AM
Much appreciate your kind remarks, Janice. Many thanks for your visit and comments.

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