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If There Was Just One Thing I Could Change The Decline And Fall of Man

Metamorphosis of Man If there was only one wish That I was allowed, It would be to go back In time, to the origins of man, To remove the gene, That nurtures Man's hate And journey as one, Through our own pearly gates , If there was only one wish That I was allowed, I would summon the heavens Transcending the clouds, And I would replace this life, For one not yet not known With a blanket of love , With a dome covered shroud . If there was only one wish That I was allowed, I would be the mind And the heart that Only shone light, I would be the cradle, That rocks our world to sleep, I would be the eyes and ears Of listened foresight. I would happily surrender, Everything I now own, And watch my world turn from crystal to sand. I would wait for a sign. For time to reset. But if I could change one thing, It would be, The Decline and Fall of Man.

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/10/2024 2:17:00 PM

Bravo, congratulations on your win.

Daniel Caplin
Date: 3/10/2024 2:49:00 PM

Hi Richard , many thanks for taking the time to stop and read my poem and equally for a heartfelt message , your comment means a lot to me , thank you. Daniel

I Am Anaya

Date: 3/10/2024 10:23:00 AM

"In time, to the origins of man, To remove the gene, That nurtures Man's hate" clever & sobering! Enjoyed your creative poem, congratulations on your win! I Am Anaya

Daniel Caplin
Date: 3/10/2024 11:01:00 AM

Hello again , man needs to be reprogrammed and for the hate , greed , evil to be removed for good , so that we can all see the good and the love in one another, and mans colour, religion, sexuality or seen through the same eyes , as equal . Thanks again for messaging and I'm glad you liked the poem . Daniel

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 3/9/2024 9:42:00 AM

Ah, that is so commendable and true, dear poet. A wonderful poem penned, congrats on your win, really enjoyed this

Daniel Caplin
Date: 3/9/2024 9:53:00 AM

Hello Mystic Rose , that is so very kind of you to take the time to both read and send congratulations , it's truly appreciated . Thank you , Daniel

Tom Woody

Date: 3/8/2024 6:41:00 AM

Awesome poem and congrats on your placement Daniel. Yes, if we could somehow alter Adam's choice what a different world it would be. I still believe Eden is in store. Hang in there ...

Daniel Caplin
Date: 3/8/2024 7:04:00 AM

Hi Tom , I'm so pleased you liked the poem , any recognition is always appreciated , and I thank you sincerely. Congratulations to the worthy winner , well deserved . Thanks again Tom , have an awesome weekend . Daniel

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 3/1/2024 6:45:00 AM

Hello Daniel, This is a beautiful, heartfelt reflection on the profound desire to eradicate hatred and foster love. Your words are deeply long for a better future where humanity transcends its divisive tendencies and embraces unity and compassion. The imagery of metamorphosis and transformation beautifully conveys the hope for a new dawn of understanding and empathy. You inspire introspection and underscore the importance of collective responsibility in shaping a more harmonious world. - Blessings, Daniel

Daniel Caplin
Date: 3/1/2024 7:11:00 AM

Many thanks Daniel , it's easier to write when it comes from the heart , on the occasion i feel as if I merely facilitate the pen , then it dispenses with me . Thank you for you kind and uplifting comments , you read and write poetry with a poets heart . May your God go with you . Daniel

Daniel Caplin

Date: 3/1/2024 4:26:00 AM

Thanks Sara, for your kind and inspiring words ,but I'm not sure about the ending , have a wonderful day , Daniel

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 2/29/2024 4:53:00 PM

truly a profound and mesmerizing poem, Daniel. I sense your authentic passion "To remove the gene, That nurtures Man's hate." Oh if wishing could make it so. Hate seems so unnecessary and illogical. Have never been able to accept it as a reality. Nicely done and powerful poem, Daniel. Have a great evening, Sara