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If Only I Could Soon Be Slain Again

If Only I Could Soon Be Slain Again If only I could soon be slain again, As first true love and she slew me. With pure joy, from ear to ear I would grin, We would settle down by the sea! If only, life would not change my bold plans And steal dearest fruit from my tree. On white-sand beaches we would get our tans Breathing fresh sea air, being free! Should we ever have that love-chance again, Under new suns with cheerful glows. I would cherish her gold, a blessed man, In love's firm grasp, see that it grows! For that chance, what dragon must I now slay? Answer please, I fear more delay! Robert J. Lindley, 10-23-2017 Sonnet, in 10-8 syllable verses... 128 syllables , 108 words... mark hit...

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Date: 12/13/2019 10:01:00 PM
To have a second chance to makes things right doesn't present itself to many. Both parties would have to change in order for harmony to blend in unison. It would be worth a dragon slaying.
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Date: 12/13/2019 5:42:00 PM
Very good. To the point and easy to understand. Thanks for sharing. Best of luck in the contest
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Robert Lindley
Date: 12/14/2019 4:34:00 PM
Thank you my friend. Writing it as an easy way to understand is no easy task. As is exposing so much of ones self, ones life.. God bless....
Date: 12/13/2019 10:35:00 AM
Magic and meaning flowing from the Master! A grand poem. A real poem! Panagiota xxx
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Robert Lindley
Date: 12/14/2019 4:32:00 PM
Thank you my friend. At my age slaying a dragon would be a truly stupendous feat! When once in my wild youth. it was almost a daily chore to be relished it was so common.. God bless..

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