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If It's Broke, Fix It!

Looking in the mirror (I think somehow it broke) But think I will choose life Instead of just plain croak! Thinking of insanity Somehow became a passion But get rid of those thoughts I think they're out of fashion! Able to live; able to thrive Praise the Lord; I'm still alive!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 1/27/2010 5:20:00 PM
Amen and Amen, my little Brother! Alive and free! Keep writing and inspiring brothers and sisters! I really love this. Goes to my favs. Welcome to the Soup! Peace, Audrey
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Date: 1/20/2010 9:26:00 AM
This is funny...enjoyed reading...Marty
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Date: 1/19/2010 2:54:00 PM
Amen to casting out thoughts of death and reveling in the ability to surve the challenges that are tossed our way. I admire your spirit, Joshua, and your choice as expressed here. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/15/2010 9:13:00 AM
Amen!...Nicely written, well-expressed!---Milt
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Date: 1/13/2010 3:01:00 PM
Kool piece Joshua, made me chuckle >> James
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