If It's Broke, Fix It!

Looking in the mirror
(I think somehow it broke)
But think I will choose life
Instead of just plain croak!
Thinking of insanity
Somehow became a passion
But get rid of those thoughts 
I think they're out of fashion!
Able to live; able to thrive
Praise the Lord; I'm still alive!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Haick Avatar
January 27, 2010 at 5:20 PM
Amen and Amen, my little Brother! Alive and free! Keep writing and inspiring brothers and sisters! I really love this. Goes to my favs. Welcome to the Soup! Peace, Audrey
Owens Avatar
January 20, 2010 at 9:26 AM
This is funny...enjoyed reading...Marty
Devonshire Avatar
January 19, 2010 at 2:54 PM
Amen to casting out thoughts of death and reveling in the ability to surve the challenges that are tossed our way. I admire your spirit, Joshua, and your choice as expressed here. Love, Carolyn
Toran Avatar
January 15, 2010 at 9:13 AM
Amen!...Nicely written, well-expressed!---Milt
Fraser Avatar
January 13, 2010 at 3:01 PM
Kool piece Joshua, made me chuckle >> James
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