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If It Ain'T a Dollar

Overheard outside the store, Mother to her son, "If it ain't a dollar..." That's the sentence she'd begun. You can figure out the rest, Knowing what would fit - "If it ain't a dollar, well, Then you're not gettin' it." Was the kid upset? No way; He'd heard that line before. He shrugged and went to check it out Inside the dollar store. I guess in this economy, There'd be no risk in bettin' That many things for lots of bucks A lot of kids ain't gettin'.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 4/14/2019 12:37:00 AM
I love the Dollar Tree the most! Love the way you made the poem sound like it came out of Arkansas, Missouri, Kansas, Iowa, Missouri and Nebraska!
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Date: 4/13/2019 6:12:00 PM
Dollar stores are the best. It's like a treasure hunt for adults. Great poem.
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Date: 4/13/2019 4:22:00 PM
You're right ilene, people are getting poorer for sure. Over here we have pound land stores where everything is one pound , and they are quite popular, certainly not the best quality though
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Date: 4/13/2019 3:33:00 PM
Chapter VII bankruptcies in Honolulu were up 20.9% in March 2019 from March 2018, so Trump economics(?) clearly belie the lies! Aloha! Rico
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David Mchattie
Date: 4/13/2019 6:11:00 PM
Maybe you should get rid of the Democrats who run that state.
Date: 4/13/2019 3:05:00 PM
thought provoking poem Ilene and something that is getting so much more common in the current economy worldwide and also there is so much to tempt the kids especially with ads on the tv at christmas, got to pity parents who struggle to get food on the table let alone expensive luxuries:-( hugs jan xx
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