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If I Had To Choose

If I had to choose between loving you And breathing my last breath I would use my last breath To say I love you This is how deep my feelings are for you To the ends of the earth I would go To find you again if we ever were separated I'm a mere mortal trying to explain That my love for you is on a higher plain One that's reserved for the ultimate lovers Those that have discovered The true meaning of all of this The reward for making the journey through life With its many tragedies and pitfalls So now you see my love If I had to choose between loving you And breathing my last breath I would use my last breath To say I love you © Jack Ellison 2014

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Date: 12/16/2014 6:44:00 AM
Those first four and last four lines....are just breathtakingly sweet. You are Amazing! Hugs
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Jack Ellison
Date: 12/16/2014 9:53:00 AM
I would have expected nothing less than these sweet encouraging words from you, my dear Betty Boop! BTW Cathie loves being on Facebook and hearing and seeing what life is like where you are! She loves you as much as I! Kenny! XXXX
Date: 12/15/2014 11:52:00 AM
oh so tender and loving Jack I hope you print this out for your lovely Cathie:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Jack Ellison
Date: 12/15/2014 3:55:00 PM
It's a done deal!!! LOL Thanks Sis! Love and big big hugs! Bro... XXX
Date: 12/15/2014 9:00:00 AM
Oh Jack that's beautiful... But I can't make silly comments to your romantic piece... It's just too touching... and beautiful... and heartfelt... It even brought tears to the eyes of Granpa Troll... And that IS rare.
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Date: 12/15/2014 11:43:00 AM
WOW! Now that's quite an accomplishment! Maybe I'll retire from the site after that!!! XXX

Book: Shattered Sighs