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IF I DIED TONIGHT



If I died tonight…
I’d have unfinished business
I’d have unsent birthday cards
I’d have unsung melodies 
I’d have unwritten poems
I’d have unpainted canvases askew
But you would always remember
The last words I said to you
Were that I love you


Submitted on June 17, 2018, for contest MID JUNE 2018 PREMIERE 155 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND

Originally posted in February, 2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 2/10/2018 10:23:00 AM
It's true with most of us that in the end, most things will go down in the unfinished business category; but most important of all, we have to remember to let the ones we love know that we love them. Excellent piece with a deep message indeed! Hugs. Pandita
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Date: 2/10/2018 10:37:00 AM
Thank you, Pandita, Much appreciated visit and message from you.
Date: 2/7/2018 1:33:00 AM
If that what death may entail, it is a good ending. Nothing more important than love...It is all that remains when the shutters are down...
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Date: 2/7/2018 4:31:00 PM
Thank you very much, Kai, for your visit and lovely poetic comment. Best regards.
Date: 2/6/2018 5:38:00 PM
faving you back because this is AWESOME.
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Date: 2/6/2018 6:49:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea. Most appreciated.
Date: 2/6/2018 5:17:00 PM
For those who die loved and loving they are truly blessed. Beautiful.
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Date: 2/6/2018 6:49:00 PM
Indeed. Thank you for your visit and warm comment, Elizabeth.
Date: 2/6/2018 7:11:00 AM
A sweet depiction!
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Date: 2/6/2018 8:05:00 AM
Thanks, Vijay. I appreciate your visit and comment.
Date: 2/5/2018 7:36:00 PM
i can relate to this Line, always got unfinished business going on... and those three magic words.
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Date: 2/5/2018 8:31:00 PM
Thanks for your visit and comments, Lewis. Much appreciated.