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If I Could Go Back - Collaboration

On the old wood porch a doll forgotten all winter in the cold fluttering on a branch a pink ribbon still so pretty to behold _________________________ July 22, 2018 Poetry/Rhyme/If I Could Go Back Copyright Protected, ID 18-1045-122-01 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Add a Stanza To My Poem sponsor, Charles Messina, Chose- 3. If I Could Go Back Fourth Place

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/29/2018 4:19:00 PM

Congrats on your winning work ..Way to go.. Sara

Constance La France

Date: 8/28/2018 4:53:00 PM

Eve, thanks for visiting my poem and the congratulations, appreciate ~

Eve Roper

Date: 8/28/2018 3:15:00 PM

Love your addition to Charlie's poem, Dear Heart a.k.a. Broken Wings ...Congratulations on your win!

Charles Messina

Date: 8/28/2018 7:15:00 AM

BW, I absolutely love the stanza you added to my poem. It is one of my fave's and it would have ranked higher if you had added the rest of the poem. Not knowing where you fit this in in the poem I had to still considerate a perfect fit. Congratulations on you placement and thanks for entering my contest. Charlie :)

Constance La France
Date: 8/28/2018 4:54:00 PM