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If I Am -- You Are (Part 1)

If I am a stonewall, YOU are the shim that makes me Whole YOU are the root the glorious Bloom, I, the thorned stem of a Rose If I am the rising Sun, YOU are the Golden warmth around me YOU are the illumination of Moonlight, I, just the twinkle of a star If I am the waves of the ocean, YOU are the Loving Life with in YOU are the Everlasting Love of my Heart, I, Forever Your Liege TO BARBARA

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/31/2010 5:35:00 PM
What a lovely tribute of love, the imagery touches the core of the reader. I am sure that your Barbara will love this marvelous declaration of love. I thank you HG for sharing the read. God's Love and Many Blessings, Always,Adell
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Date: 3/18/2010 12:13:00 AM
this is a beautiful wave of emotions. "I, the thorned stem of a rose" thats a very sweet line.[SOUP MAIL] -Always&Forever your sister spirit Lynn
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Date: 3/17/2010 1:15:00 PM
Oh yes....she will love this! How sweet you are!! ~ Love, Carrie
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Date: 3/17/2010 9:19:00 AM
Excellent and sweet tribute to Barbara, HG! I'm a "hopeless romantic" so this definitely goes to my favs.! Peace, Audrey
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Date: 3/17/2010 6:04:00 AM
What a wonderful tribute to sweet Barbara, HG! Please tell her you've posted it; you'll make her day! Love you, Carolyn
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