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If He Was Like Me

love can't touch that ice cold heart imagination struggles to enter that closed mind happiness fails to touch his soul he lived on but life left him years ago along with the girl who stole the warmth from his heart the color from his thoughts and the smile from his face

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Date: 2/16/2010 4:04:00 AM
Ah, that hurts
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Date: 2/16/2010 12:21:00 AM
Love the imagery of the man left bitter from a breakup. Like it!
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