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If God Has a Heart

If God has a heart, What pains man must cause him: the killing, the cheating, the lying, the hurting. Does He weep when we war? Does He mourn our senseless deaths? Does He despair of our willful blindness? He is God-- He must feel every lonely death, every lost breath... billions of dots of pain and grief, each singeing, burning His divine heart.

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Greg Gaul

Date: 4/11/2018 2:14:00 PM

Well penned and sensitively presented insight into the theoretical musings of personified God. Excellent use of questions, if I may be so bold to say. Delighted and humbled to be in your company as a placing poet in the contest. Thanks muchly.

L. J. Carber
Date: 4/11/2018 9:57:00 PM

Thank you, Greg-- 'musings' is the right word--I choose to believe in a personal 'active' God as deism (a distant, impersonal god) seems to me pointless and as empty as atheism. And if we are made in His image, then that means He is a Being with emotions.

Susan Gentry

Date: 4/11/2018 1:17:00 AM

Congratulations on your win with this thought-provoking poem.

L. J. Carber
Date: 4/11/2018 9:58:00 PM

Thanks, Susan

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/10/2018 10:10:00 PM

What a wonderful perspective. A lovely read, L.J., and most deserving win.

L. J. Carber
Date: 4/11/2018 9:58:00 PM

Thanks, Line

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 7/31/2017 3:21:00 AM

Congratulations on you win. I obviously like this poem. I it is so simple and therefore (not still) beautiful). Many wishes, Kai

L. J. Carber
Date: 7/31/2017 10:04:00 PM

Thank you, Kai-- my 'stuff' is simple, but I hope never simple-minded.

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 7/30/2017 4:21:00 PM

Oh, how I have contemplated this (and much more that's related) in my search for the divine ... born into a strong Christian family and a Born-Again later in life, I had a cisis of faith a couple of years ago (at age 57!) and I don't know if I'll recover. The search goes on, but this is exquisite! Congrats!

L. J. Carber
Date: 7/31/2017 10:20:00 PM

I can understand Greg-- I was an agnostic until I had a near-death experience at 24 while almost drowning. But I have never found faith to be easy in the 46 years since, because God is not easy: if He were, we would take Him for granted, because we are not easy. The essence of faith seems, to me at least, to be 'reaching out', for our little souls are desperate to connect with the Great Soul, and fortunate are those who feel that longing for they begin then to transcend mortality itself. Suggest C.S. Lewis's "Mere Christianity", Timothy Keller's 'The Case for God' and Julian of Norwich, Revelations of the Divine.