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Poem written for and submitted to “Snow Fantasy or Christmas Nostalgia” poetry contest, Constance La France, sponsor, December 1, 2025. 

IF CHRISTMAS COULD AGAIN TASTE LIKE THIS

“Christmas – that magic blanket that wraps itself about us, that something so intangible that it is like a fragrance. It may weave a spell of nostalgia. Christmas may be a day of feasting, or of prayer, but always it will be a day of remembrance – a day in which we think of everything we have ever loved.” Augusta E. Rundel

Winter drafts crept in, thin and sly, 
a silver breath through window cracks~ 
Jack Frost’s graffiti on the panes, 
furnace’s heat rose up chasing him back. 

Mother’s kitchen smelled of cinnamon, 
her oven wafting delicious sugar clouds. 
Mother’s hands were like an alchemist’s, 
turning dates to diamonds, figs to jewels 
adding candied fruits in batter deep~ 
The brandy seeped through cheesecloth veins, 
the fruitcake drunk with brandy’s dark desire. 

Enchanted by her royal presence,
I stood before the Christmas tree~
a queen in her green tinseled gown,  
an angelic tiara in her hair,
her ornate jewels catching every light~
and at her feet, six ladies-in-waiting,
poinsettias dressed in bright red velvet, 
kept court beside her every night. 
 
Made from a polar bear’s yawn of wool, 
My snow-white mittens ate my fingers whole~
Father softly hummed Jingle Bells 
while dancing with me in the town square.  
Streetlamps blurred into golden halos.
My boots cracked the ice, like a clock 
counting down to Saint Nick’s slow-motion dive 
from the courthouse roof to the square below. 

Then—hooves? No. Just the mayor’s truck.  
Santa’s laugh rang out above carolers’
honeyed voices singing The First Noel.

Christmas Eve: the stocking’s gullet  
spilled peppermint, rhyme, and silver moons.
Then came the slice, the waited prize~
a slice of fruitcake steeped in sugared brandy
whipped cream melting like Christmas wishes.
I wish Christmas could again taste like this.
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Crandall Avatar
December 12, 2025 at 3:45 PM
Brings back my own memories of the wonderful tastes of Christmas, back when I could eat a lot more, especially sweets.
Gauthier Avatar
December 6, 2025 at 6:58 PM
What beautiful memories ~
Etgen-Baker Avatar
December 7, 2025 at 6:32 PM
thank you, Line.
George Avatar
December 3, 2025 at 9:25 PM
The fruit cake made by your mom and the Christmas tree dressed like a queen with ornate jewels and flashy green tinseled gown are things etched in your Christmas memories. For Christmas, I too often make two or three fruit cakes to be shared. I have a host of memories of Christmas quite different from yours. Beautiful poem, dear Sara.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
December 7, 2025 at 6:33 PM
thanks for visiting, Valsa, and for appreciating my memories. Glad to hear that we both make fruitcakes, hug, SAra
Jones Avatar
December 3, 2025 at 7:18 AM
Wonderfully written and love the photo!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
December 7, 2025 at 6:33 PM
thanks, karen!
Hind Avatar
December 2, 2025 at 7:01 PM
Amazing. Everyone should read this at Christmas time. <3
Etgen-Baker Avatar
December 7, 2025 at 6:33 PM
what a wonderful thing to say!!! Thank you <3 hugs, Sara
DiMino Avatar
December 2, 2025 at 12:06 AM
"Streetlamps blurred into golden halos. My boots cracked the ice, like a clock counting down to Saint Nick’s slow-motion dive from the courthouse roof to the square below." Beautiful! You indeed had a Fairy -tale youth. Charming memories recollected. An ornament of all those delightful Christmases in every poem you write. Wishing you an early Merry Christmas!!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
December 7, 2025 at 6:35 PM
thank you, Joe....yes, in some respect I had an idyllic childhood. Glad you noticed what I weave into my poems. Color me grateful for you. Merry Christmas to you and yours
Vaso Avatar
December 1, 2025 at 11:05 PM
Such wonderful memories of Christmas!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
December 7, 2025 at 6:34 PM
thank you, Arthur...appreciate your visit and kind words
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