David Kavanagh Poet Free verse

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Pick-A-Title, Vol. 41 Poetry Contest
sponsored by Edward Ibeh 02/04/24

Prompt #1  (if anything)

 

 

If anything

If anything 

I see them each morning 
standing by her statue 
at the roundabout,
Pensive, deep in prayer, 
reflective,
perhaps seeking solace
I don’t know!

Maybe searching for forgiveness 
trying to make a connection 
with their loved ones,
using her image as mediation,
I honestly don’t know!

Could be channelling messages 
of love, praise, loss,
or something completely 
different, 
I really don’t know!

I drove past again today 
not a sinner was there
no one deep in prayer,  

Thin Lizzy’s
#Waiting for an alibi#
came on my car radio,
For a split second (if anything)
it all made sense, 
and I did know!

I took note of the time and 
date,
and went on my way!

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Linda Alice Fowler February 24, 2024 at 6:48 AM Interesting and filled with terrific imagery David. I see congratulations are in order as well! :) David Kavanagh February 24, 2024 at 8:24 AM I was delighted to get a placement with this one Linda, it really is difficult to assess what thoughts go through people’s minds when standing or kneeling by roadside statues, cheers David

Edward Ibeh February 11, 2024 at 7:01 AM Congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful piece, David. Lovely imagery and song. Thin Dizzy is a great band! David Kavanagh February 11, 2024 at 10:27 AM Thank you Edward, I’m always delighted to get into the mix, Lizzy one of the best to come out of Ireland, poor Phil died a young man, cheers David

I Am Anaya February 5, 2024 at 3:01 PM Love that when music serves as an epiphany, in my car. Religious statues a crutch for those in dire spiritual need to reflect on for some, give thanks and be grateful all the time instead of praying only when in dire straits ha! Here it's Confederate statues of Generals who fought for Southern states to own slaves, still there to reflect or and protect. You spin an intriguing yarn! David Kavanagh February 5, 2024 at 3:21 PM No yarn Anaya, the song actually came on the radio as I passed the statue, the moment just seemed so fitting, more so because nobody was there praying or reflecting, or indeed waiting for an alibi, there was a huge movement in Ireland about 40 yrs ago, when people claimed all the statues were moving, huge crowds gathered and held vigils, people stared at them that long, they actually believed they were moving, cheers David

Sotto Poet February 5, 2024 at 10:39 AM Your poem, my friend David, exudes profound contemplations that beckon readers to delve into the enigmas of human existence and the intricacies of human sentiments and drives. It underscores the significance of embracing ambiguity, and fostering receptiveness to epiphanic instances, even amidst uncertainty and skepticism. David Kavanagh February 5, 2024 at 11:24 AM It’s a strange phenomenon Lasaad, which certainly sets us apart from the animals, another human condition for sure, which sometimes makes me ponder if we are more prone to epiphanies at the lowest times in our lives, cheers David

Victor Buhagiar February 5, 2024 at 10:28 AM There are many statutes in Malta. I often notice people who stop to pray. I pray in church. David Kavanagh February 5, 2024 at 11:20 AM Malta is a very religious country Victor, Ireland was too, but has become more secular in recent times, still some people do stand and reflect at our multitude of statues, which is no harm whatsoever, cheers David

Silent One February 4, 2024 at 11:36 AM Deep thoughts in a poem that invites readers to contemplate the mysteries of human existence and the complexities of human emotions and motivations. It emphasizes the importance of embracing uncertainty and remaining open to moments of insight and revelation, even in the midst of ambiguity and doubt. David Kavanagh February 4, 2024 at 12:37 PM A fair comment S1, sometimes it’s difficult to distinguish coincidence from revelation, that can be interpreted as a form of intervention, I’m agnostic myself, so never ever rule out the possibility of a higher power, be that a god or a sentient universe, cheers David