If

Do we call it routine
this rut that we're in
Would we be better off had we made other plans
If I'd gone to a dance
Another ring on my hand
instead of the lake, where our story began

If we never had met, if my parents had moved
to another small town
where a job was approved
If you lived in the east
If I lived in the west
and the rest of the world
didn't matter the least

If we did what we pleased
If we traveled abroad
And each day of our life
we never sacrificed much

Only thought about "I"
Never walked down an aisle
Never searched for a house
Never held a sweet child
Never watched a first smile
Never walked them to school
Never pushed them along
Never loved them so much

If we never had bills, mounting high as the hills
If you never held me
If I never held you
If we never grew up
If we had given up
Oh, where would I be?
If we hadn't hung on

I can't bear to just think
   of where I would be without you


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8/28/16
Contest: Poetry Unhinged
Sponsor: John Lawless

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 9/29/2016 6:02:00 AM
I like this 'IF' for two short letters it speaks volumes. Lovely Carrie. Thank you.
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Date: 8/31/2016 8:07:00 PM
Carrie, The rat-a-tat rhythm added to the effect of the short burst lines. The repetition of certain phrases and words held the poetic drumsticks to their beat. Thanks for participating in the contest
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Date: 8/31/2016 1:48:00 PM
Your writing is always a delight to the senses, and the emotions, and this one struck all the right chords, familiar as the theme is, you put your unique stamp on it. Congrats on a fine placement in a very difficult contest.
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Date: 8/31/2016 1:14:00 PM
Carrie, beautifully written lovely lady :)-luloo
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Date: 8/30/2016 7:39:00 PM
As my mother used to say, Carrie, " if 'If's' and 'ands' were kettles and cans, there'd be plenty of work for tinkers'. A lovely, wistful write. Much enjoyed. Viv x
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Date: 8/28/2016 11:21:00 PM
:D Great reflection on "IF"...GL Sunita
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Date: 8/28/2016 9:10:00 PM
I saw the title "If" by your name and was afraid to click on it because your poems, depending on content, often go straight for my tear ducts. And, my premonition was right, Carrie - you got me again. So well done, an old and universal topic presented in a unique way that saddened me and thrilled my poet. Love it. All the best, always ... CayCay
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