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Ied

rent a wrack improvised execution device all you need is a license to kill ***

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Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 5/1/2018 12:03:00 PM

Wonderfully hard-hitting write, Friend. Hate is the enemy, and until we stop focusing on the MEANS of destruction and calamity and giving that attention to hatred and mental health, it will continue ... sadly. It IS far too easy. Blessings, Mo. <3

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 5/2/2018 6:41:00 AM

Yup, yup, and yup. <3 (& xo!)

Arturo Michael

Date: 4/27/2018 12:00:00 PM

A poor man can't get a license...All the best Maureen...

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 4/29/2018 9:03:00 AM

;p <3 <3 <3

Arturo Michael
Date: 4/28/2018 11:16:00 AM

Yes, you're right...you'll have to save to take the metro...buy a cup of coffee if you're too early...and you'll have to be a good shot...money short to buy bullets...too complicated...

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 4/28/2018 5:55:00 AM

True enough. But if someone wants to kill a bunch of people I'm sure lack of money won't stop them. Though "I'm saving up to be a mass murderer" is a mildly amusing twisted thought ;) Peace and love Arturo, it's a crazy time we live in. xomo

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/26/2018 3:33:00 PM

i cringe at the thought of frequent mideeds like this, maureen... good one!..huggs

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 4/27/2018 9:18:00 AM

It's just too easy. Crazy. Mo hugs!!

Silent One

Date: 4/26/2018 7:49:00 AM

Damn...

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 4/26/2018 8:17:00 AM

Dumbfounded. x

Aurore Severo

Date: 4/25/2018 11:48:00 PM

with few words such powerful thoughts! peace and love xoxo

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 4/26/2018 8:16:00 AM

Thank you Aurore. Peace and love your way too :) xomo

Ralph Sergi

Date: 4/25/2018 3:48:00 PM

A subject of bad taste and beautiful poetry. Good selection, my compliments!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 4/25/2018 10:03:00 PM

My stomache churning in horror, this came out. Ty xomo

Jack Ellison

Date: 4/25/2018 10:43:00 AM

WOO HOO... GUESS WHO??? Yup, that T.O. dudester paying you a visit!!! Write this date down! Love, Happy T.O. Jack XOX

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 4/25/2018 10:06:00 PM

Hugs love. Just horrified. xxx

Jack Ellison
Date: 4/25/2018 10:50:00 AM

Didn't mean to make light of this dusgusting, deliberate, sick, totally insane act... very very close to home!!!

J.W. Earnings

Date: 4/25/2018 4:23:00 AM

Criminal, yet coolbeans poem. :) so epic -JWE

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 4/25/2018 6:18:00 AM

Thank you JW, appreciate :) xomo!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/24/2018 10:17:00 PM

Governments everywhere are lining up to 'rent a wrack.' If they had any brains, of course, they'd be a renting a rack for them. (LOL) Why buy when you can rent? ... Ever-clever, Maureen! :) gw

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/25/2018 7:10:00 PM

The nerve of me replying to my own comment!!! Arrogance unleashed, I guess. At any rate, just wanted to mention that I had to rack my brain to come up with the comment above. (Yeah, sure, right, uh-huh gw...

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 4/25/2018 6:16:00 AM

Heh, exactly! I didn't want to implicate the "Rent a Wreck" company ;) xomo!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/24/2018 7:05:00 PM

wow, I LOVE this one. Very clever

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 4/25/2018 6:14:00 AM

Thank you Andrea. An an angry frustrated hurting muse popped this out. xomo!

James Swartz

Date: 4/24/2018 5:29:00 PM

Very dark and mysterious and wonderful Maureen. A driver's license can get you anything now a days.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 4/25/2018 6:13:00 AM

Thank you, you read right through me. I was beside myself when this came out, horrored ear glued to the radio: Another vehicular killing spree, close to home this this time. And... linked to a new one, INCEL, involuntary celibacy, oh my, we really are an ailing society. So disturbing. x

Laura Leiser

Date: 4/24/2018 3:39:00 PM

Your well chosen words succinctly put the chill in this dangerous device. Excellent verse!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 4/25/2018 6:05:00 AM

Thank you Laura. peace and love :)